Abzeichen 10
Moments 32
Snowmitten00
Good chapter , but you have a repeat paragraph nearby the top
Snowmitten00
Great chapter. Glad to see character development.
Snowmitten00
Looks like some great things are ahead. Just saw one typo. You have invention . I think you’re looking for demon invasion
Snowmitten00
You have a couple paragraphs that are repeating themselves. Keep up the good work
Snowmitten00
Hey great chapter. Really enjoying the development of the story. Just wanted to let you know that you repeated the same paragraph twice. Keep up the good work [img=update]
Snowmitten00
Hopping to get a lily chapter back home. We enjoy seeing her pov when she tells her parents
Snowmitten00
Really good chapter.
Snowmitten00
Appreciate you adding more chapters
Snowmitten00
Keep on the good job
Cool chapter
Strongest Warlock - Wizard World Irregular
Fantasy · Elyon