Bored_Author

A good read, some parts of the plot needs improving and a bit faster pace would be good.

Writing the review once again after 70 chapters. Firstly let's talk about pros. 1. The story seems fresh which doesn't follow the generic novel theme of making the mc overpowered without any reason. 2. All the supporting characters seems to have their own backstory, which gives a sense of familiarity to the reader instead of just considering them as extra characters. 3. The writing quality so far is good with very little grammatical errors, which is hard to find in webnovel these days. 4. THIS NOVEL IS NOT HAREM. 5. The author is very interactive, listen to his readers and takes suggestions which are very good from my perspective. Now coming to the cons. 1. Some two chapters from the novel seem very familiar to a certain novel, although the author has corrected himself and is developing his own story, I had to mention that. 2. The story progress is very slow, which may lead the readers to annoyance. 3. The author tends to repeat the MC goals every now and then which may seem very repetitive. That's all. This is my view of the novel. I would say pretty good, a solid 9/10.Let's see how the story progress and I will be back to write the review once again after 150 chapters. Good luck author keep up the good work.

12 chapters are released so far. And the story up until now is Top Notch! The world-building and the character creations are very neat, every character seems to have their own stories, which I suppose the Author is going to tell us in the future. I especially like the way of his writing, although there are some minor mistakes, so far the story is interesting and keeps the readers on edge. The update stability is good as at least a single chapter will be released daily, I can't say more as if now, I will definitely leave a review in the future after this novel reaches 50 or 60 chapters.

sorry for that, I will fix it by today

two to three at most

yes

I will correct it immediately.