you know, I dont actually care what you think
The Assassin of Nin moved like a shadow, and in the blink of an eye, my head was severed from my body. As my bloodied head fell onto the table, the shocked gasps of my harem rang in my ears. It was a gruesome scene, my blood flowed forth like a waterfall and drenched all the horrified on-lookers. Despite my pain and the darkness closing in, I found the strength to curse my treacherous brother.
Eastern · Escape_Sequence
This makes more sense later, as Ye comes from a lineage that is rare within the Nin Realm.
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That's good to know. Thank you for reading.
Very true. Archery, unarmed combat and fist techniques are some of the many skills Ye must acquire from Martial Arts Skill Tree.
"Yes, Master. I'll dedicate myself to honing these skills."
Eastern · Escape_Sequence
Author here. Mechagear NEON is an action-packed thriller with more lore than you can shake a stick at. It is much darker than my other work, dealing with heavier themes like class division, authoritarianism and war. The world of Neon City is even more imperfect than ours, but I think there are still parallels to our society. If you're looking for a story to lose yourself in, specifically one with a futuristic or cyberpunk theme, this is the one.
no harem
Thank you for the feedback. I think you'll find there's more character depth later in the series.
This is a very dark story with strong world building. The author has intricately crafted a detailed world. And most importantly, he presents his ideas in a digestible manner without relying on lore dumps. There's a lot of "showing" and little "telling", which creates immersion and lets the story flow smoothly. I'm looking forward to reading more.
not sure what you are talking about. the entire book is in the 1st person, there is no 3rd person at all. i certainly wont be rewriting anything based on your feedback.
Magical Girl Sidekick
Fantasy · Escape_Sequence