You are absolutely right, I am trying to be better. The MC is really not acting like he is in a marvel universe. This is my first time writing any coherent story, and I need to give all characters depth and relevance. Hydra would come at a threat every chance they get, and shield personnel wouldn’t take the word of kid. Thank you for your input I will use your suggestions to make a better story. Thank you and have a goo day.
Thank you and honestly I have been writing the chapters and coming up with how I would like the story to develop as I write each individual chapter. I am trying to make a better foundation and give readers longer chapters that I filled with more depth.
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If the story is bad and you find it not very interesting. I'll just give a generic answer that this is my first story ever. That's why I started with a fan-fic. Thanks and if you are reading this have a good day.
The Son of Marvel
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This is what the current MC looks like at 15. For the suit just imagine Asgardian runes all over it. With a metallic sheen because it is technically armor.
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You are right I am trying to make the story a little more weighty and not rely on pure might. Thanos is a cuniving being I would like for him to weave a web that almost dooms the Mc. Something to push him past his limits.
When I stop talking he starts to speak himself, "I know about Thanos plans boy, you are not giving me a good reason. Why you are not on earth right now planning for the safety of your world." As soon as he says his peace, I cut straight to the point as not to anger the king of the gods. "King Odin I have a plan to confront Thanos army after your son opens a portal for the chitauri armies to come through I'll head through that portal alone to confront them." I pause to let that sink into the king's mind and then I continue. "After I decimate the chitauri fleets and space station. I'll take the fight to Thanos himself, I won't confront him at first I'll attack his supply lines and any worlds that are under is control. I'll destroy every asset he has in the universe leaving him for last. I know Thanos is strong, one of the strongest warriors in the universe."
The Son of Marvel
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All is good this is literally my first time at writing any kind of story and I appreciate anything that can make me a better writer.
True I am tryng to get better the Mc needs more life a better sense of purpose. That is what I am trying to instill in chapters 29 and beyond. Thank you for reading I know it’s just a way to pass the time. You have a great day
True a lot of humans are ten times worse then most aliens. As he goes through more battles he will probably change.
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original Marshal Of The North
The year is 265 AC and in the southern hills of the Northern Mountain range in one of the more prominent mountain clans. A very large baby boy was born into the minor noble House of Harclay. With a gift from the old gods and a knack for violence how will this seemingly minor background character. Crush the Wheel of fate of Westeros for eternity and set the northern most kingdom on a path of glory. The ASOIAF universe is owned by Geroge RR Martian, the only characters that are original would be those I have to make up to cover the backstory of the northern mountain clans. (This is my second attempt at writing, and I am taking my time to fully flesh out the story. If you find any errors or I mess up factual information let me know. I will likely only post a couple chapters a week. Till I get better at writing that is.)1 Chs 90 Sammlungen
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The Son of Marvel
What happens when a random working joe dies on the job, and the poor schmuck doesn't even realize it. That is when this particular putz wakes up from his perceived nap to a completely different perspective and a whole new world to be completely normal. What this guy doesn't realize is that this new world is far from normal. (I am a new writer so bear with me, and because of my American public-school education even though English is my native language. Grammar and punctuation is not my strong point.) No harem and some lite romance elements42 Chs 482 Sammlungen
I hope to finish the next chapter later today.
Marshal Of The North
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