Dost_11

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Dost_11
1 years ago
Commented

Going by this pattern, you'll probably just have Jiryoku kill someone at their 'canon' death. At the Temple of Fire, you'll save Asuma, but the Zombie duo will "escape" just because. Then when they're back on the prowl, at the Nara lands, you'll "kill" them. You'll probably "snipe-kill" Deidara during his fight with Sasuke. And only "kill" Pain after he will or try to destroy Konoha. And so on and so forth. Such a "nice" pattern of events for a "fanfic" with a self-insert who's supposedly maxed out his OP template. Wow oh wow.

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Dost_11
1 years ago
Commented

So, the story is titled Hollywood System. Yet, he was given a Comic-Movie System. Then, he can pick up other systems like the Cooking-Baking Sytem and others? Would it kill to just have some unity?

Dost_11
Dost_11
1 years ago
Replied to Bravewolf

Try I'm the Entertainment Tycoon or Alexander Creed. I think they did it first and better.

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Dost_11
1 years ago
Replied to Tyller_Yang

That's because this story is a somewhat of a copy of Alexander Creed: ReLife. I'm not too sure though.

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Dost_11
1 years ago
Commented

It feels like the author just crammed a backstory and it's not a very good one at that. Has dementia but still remembers stuff, how convenient is that?

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Dost_11
1 years ago
Posted

Aah yes... Brazil and their football. Their only pride because there's not much about them to be proud about. Maybe there are their models. Fortunately, they are just glorified "horse" that are ridden by powers outside Brazil. How humiliating!

Dost_11
Dost_11
1 years ago
Posted

Aah yes... Brazil and their football. Their only pride because there's not much about them to be proud about. Maybe there are their models. Fortunately, they are just glorified "horse" that are ridden by powers outside Brazil. How humiliating!