Eleanor isn’t weak, she could’ve killed him then if she had the right equipment to. As for the “they”, that would be the subjects of the king that took over after he was taken care of. There was a reason his power was only sealed, but I won’t get into that as it’s essential to the plot and I’m avoiding spoilers. Just read more.
ch 0 1 Resurgence in Darkness
Fantasy · SKMnovels
The chains holding him there weren’t anything special since he was already weakened. He only got a power boost after absorbing blood.
ch 0 1 Resurgence in Darkness
Fantasy · SKMnovels
Just keep reading lol
"Don't use your quirk on humans so easily. The backlash could range from a headache to your brain imploding," she warned, her tone serious.
Anime & Comics · SKMnovels
That sounds logical but the next chapter will show you why that won’t work.
ch 0 3 I Want To Kill You Even More
Anime & Comics · SKMnovels
Every quirk has limits, but imagining death is possible.
[Quirk name: I Imagine!]
Anime & Comics · SKMnovels
Drool with envy? Really? Simply “filled with envy” would’ve sufficed
His teammates were similarly equipped, all in epic gear, a formidable lineup. Any player here would drool with envy. Even though "Eternity" had been running for years, most players still struggled for a piece of dark gold equipment; epic gear was nearly mythical!
Fantasy · TheresaChavez
After saying “…Jason’s gear was all epic quality…” use a semi colon before describing his gear.
Jason's gear was all of epic quality, his light blue robe flowing with magical runes, his crystal blue staff shimmering, and his accessories glinting with a red hue — the unique glow of epic gear.
Fantasy · TheresaChavez
Another grammar error
Jason's gear was all of epic quality, his light blue robe flowing with magical runes, his crystal blue staff shimmering, and his accessories glinting with a red hue — the unique glow of epic gear.
Fantasy · TheresaChavez
Using the apostrophe is not necessary anymore and you also incorporated it wrongly.
Jason and his team were currently venturing into the top dungeon of "Eternity," the "Frost Crown" in hell mode. This mode had never been conquered, with the leaderboard still empty.
Fantasy · TheresaChavez
You’ve already made it clear that it is a game, no need for repetition. Also, there is an error there; Jason played AS a grand mage
In "Eternity," a fantasy game, Jason played a grand mage. After several years of operation, most players in this world had reached the maximum level, including Jason.
Fantasy · TheresaChavez
I look forward to that
Dieser Absatz wurde gestrichen.
Fantasy · just_stay
On a side note, rate the book outta 10 and reason for rating.
ch 30 One year later
Anime & Comics · SKMnovels
Understandable since the time skip shows him having 60+ abilities. Thanks I’ll do that
ch 30 One year later
Anime & Comics · SKMnovels
Thoughts? I accept all kinds of criticism
ch 30 One year later
Anime & Comics · SKMnovels
Was intently reading from the beginning, but it began to seem like an info dump as I read more. There are grammar errors and the flow is off. I would suggest going back to the drawing board and then editing. For now, I’ll add to library and read later.
ch 0 1 Prologue
Celesta- City of Angels
Fantasy · jingla_xesis