That was wrong. Definitely. Thanks for highlighting it
"To mine, of course," Andrew clarified as they continued walking, eventually entering a toy shop. "I asked you what I should get for a 7-year-old girl and a 7-year-old boy!"
Urban · Foudhaili_Idris
(Thanks for the new waifu btw) This novel, literally, got a totally brand-new plot. The protagonist (Cain) finds himself interacting with a Grim Reaper (Lorelei) so both of them could get what they want. Writing quality is decent, the plot is engaging, however it lacks a bit of world background (it still has 3 chapters so that's not really a lacking tbh) Good job, keep it up!
Fantasy · alsofnris
XD
"...Why is your scythe pink?" He pointed towards the scythe's handle. "Why the fuck do you have waterproof stickers on the handle?"
Dude I like where this is going ngl XD
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The story of Archer's life takes a dramatic turn, resulting in a captivating and suspenseful narrative. As a young man, he experiences the loss of everything important to him, only to find himself transported to a mysterious world. The trials that Archer encounters and the wisdom he gains, as a result, make for an exciting story of personal growth. The reader is kept in suspense, wondering if Archer will be able to surmount the challenges that lie ahead and find a renewed sense of purpose and fulfillment. I am eagerly anticipating the unfolding of this tale, eager to see if Archer can overcome the obstacles he faces and achieve happiness and a sense of belonging once again.
Fantasy · NegansPalace
Just finished reading the first three chapter and... Not bad! I am already captivated by Jin's determination to keep moving forward despite his difficult circumstances. I am eager to see how he will progress and influence the story for sure. Keep it up ^^
Fantasy · zowji
Wasn't expecting much when I realized that it's drama and all, I'm not really into drama. HOWEVER, I take it back XD. You managed to keep it 'kinda' balanced even though it's basically a romance accompanied with a dark side is impressive. And for Liezel to feel pleasure even though she's asexual, you've got me there. I was taken aback, literally! Keep it up, I enjoyed the story so far!
Urban · Stardreamer12
Thank you for your support! I hope you keep reading my novel because I'm confident it won't disappoint you! Thank you ^^
Fantasy · Foudhaili_Idris
Alright, I'm impressed! It's my first time reading an 'isekai' romance novel, to be honest. And damn, this is really something, I like the way the 'stupid' princess got some kind of a glow-up as well. Good job, it's really interesting!
History · Nami_Zoro
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That was wrong. Definitely. Thanks for highlighting it
"To mine, of course," Andrew clarified as they continued walking, eventually entering a toy shop. "I asked you what I should get for a 7-year-old girl and a 7-year-old boy!"
Puppet-Master
Urban · Foudhaili_Idris