Blue_Hell52

Blue_Hell52

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2022-11-01 Beigetreten Global
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Blue_Hell52
Blue_Hell52
2 days ago
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Sorry about your phone and laptop! All in all hope you get better so I pray healing over you my friend! Keep up the good work in this story!!

Blue_Hell52
Blue_Hell52
7 days ago
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Random thought what do trainers do with the exchanged Pokémon items like transferring a Pokémon from a regular poke ball to a great ball? Does it go in the trash or can he re-sell those items like a thrift store?

Worth mentioning, after acquiring the spatial backpack, Sato transferred all the items from his Rocket Team-issued watch into it. He also switched the Team Rocket issued Great Balls of his four Pokémon into the personally crafted ones he had received.

Pokemon: The Legendary Trainer

Pokemon: The Legendary Trainer

Anime & Comics · Sniperwoof

Blue_Hell52
Blue_Hell52
7 days ago
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Shouldn’t it be a galaid instead? Or is this completely AU logic?

Blue_Hell52
Blue_Hell52
16 days ago
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Good start to a new fanfic!! I would just think about when you want to show something new on the system panel like when you showed everything on the system panel then you gained a new item then you rewrote the entire system panel again I would just do a shorter version of it like Name:…. Demon Name:… System inventory: Dagger(new) Or something like that so you don’t have to constantly show the whole status page unless you haven’t in the chapter as a whole. But overall great work so far!! Keep up the good work!!

Blue_Hell52
Blue_Hell52
1 months ago
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Also would really love to see another Pokémon POV chapter or piece in the next few chapters. Also Nidoking is one of my favorite Pokémon so I’m glad you have one in this story!!!

Blue_Hell52
Blue_Hell52
1 months ago
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I know shits going down between axel and everyone else. Mainly just the fact that it feels like one of those Chinese novels where there are the prodigious young masters and they have everything and if they don’t have it they kill you because you do have it. Overall I really like this story and can see it going to a few thousand chapters and I’m so excited to see where this story continues!!

Blue_Hell52
Blue_Hell52
1 months ago
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Love this fanfic!! Keep up the good work author!!

Blue_Hell52
Blue_Hell52
1 months ago
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Would you be able to add pictures? If not that fine just wondering?

Blue_Hell52
Blue_Hell52
1 months ago
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I think the MCs bloodline could eventually be more pure than the original, that would be cool. So with that devil families would benefit from him being alive or dead so he could have like the the new satan faction on his side but the old one would be trying to kill him. Also maybe like Hogworts had a secret fifth founder and he was a pevirral and he was the most powerful of them all combined. So older wizards that know the secret will try to get his treasure through him by him being dead and using his blood or through marriage? Just some thoughts

What types of enemies would you like to see in the story? (Please specify)

Harry Potter: Bloodlines Reborn

Harry Potter: Bloodlines Reborn

Video Games · Lethq

Blue_Hell52
Blue_Hell52
1 months ago
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Option 1