Nyx_heart

Nyx_heart

LV 2
2022-10-04 Beigetreten Global
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Nyx_heart
Nyx_heart
2 years ago
Posted

The story has an inviting synopsis, and the first two chapters were captivating, although there are some places I feel like the writer didn't adequately elucidate for the right perceptibility, I do like the writer's creativity l just feel that the writer should seek out more of that originality.

Nyx_heart
Nyx_heart
2 years ago
Posted

The story has a good plot which I see the author is striving to express, I know it's the author's first work but I see potential in it.

Nyx_heart
Nyx_heart
2 years ago
Posted

A nice story with an engaging plot the author did a fine job in the novel's layout.

Nyx_heart
Nyx_heart
2 years ago
Posted

A Good story with a good concept, the novel is okay, but I believe there's still room for the story to evolve and I would like the author to do that, nonetheless, It's a nice novel.

  • THE BRIDGE BETWEEN REALMS. original

    THE BRIDGE BETWEEN REALMS.

    Fantasy WEAKTOSTRONG VAMPIRE FIRSTLOVE

    Ever since she opened her eye to the world, she had been given one rule she must live by, which is to be perfect, without a single flaw and if she does not keep to this rule, she would face dire consequences. Genevieve the rightful heiress to Phantasia Inc. one of the biggest and globally dominating companies in the world has been forced to live by this rule since birth but what happens when she meets the mysterious and cold-hearted Dane and they become rivals? ...... "What is love?". He asked with phlegmatic modulation and aspect as he glanced away from me. I couldn't answer his question immediately because I never expect such a question from him. " Love is a strong feeling of genuine affection which makes one value another person's interest and wellbeing as a top priority over their own regardless of circumstance". I replied when I finally regained my composure. "Where does it come from?". " It...it comes from the brain but it will always remain a matter of the heart". I replied almost hesitantly. Unexpectedly he turned toward me, staring straight into my eye, still with an emotionless profile. "If I choose to open your head or heart in search of this love...... would I find it". He inquired boldly. I felt the chills run down my spine, for a moment I was frightened and I couldn't breathe, I held my breath, it was until he gazed away from me that I could finally exhale. l thought of taking his words for humor to put me at ease but I couldn't shake off the lethal feeling I got from his voice and overall aspect he was never the kind of person to smile, to say he was joking would be crazy. " Love is an emotion just like pain and hate it can't be seen". There was silence between us for a while until he broke the silence. "Something that can't be seen or grasped physically does not exist.........if one has lived long enough they'll realize that just like pain and hate, love is a deception people have to fill up their vanity because in the end that is all they can ever do".

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