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SUMMON CARDS I think it would be interesting to include characters from Breath of Fire. games #1-4 have a Mc named Ryu, he can turn into a dragon and has lots of combat capabilities. game #1 has a version of the kingdom of Wyndia that has binged people who are able to transform into large birds in adulthood, Nina, the typical princess of Wyndia in the first three games, is a support/healer focused individual another favorite is the weretiger in game three, but you have to have the command skill to control him when he goes beast mode another summoning option to consider is Mew or Mewtwo from Pokemon or possibly any pokemon. I think most of them would be rather cute. SKILL CARDS Alchemy: he might be able to make potions to regenerate the sexual organs of Natasha Romanof. doesn't matter if it is the Potion or Cultivator type White Magic: for the same reason, though it will include buffs and debuffs along with the highest tier spell among them being the resurrection spell. Creation: the creation skill for items, beings, skills, etc. Receives 3 tokens every day to create different things. thing range, from highest tier to lowest tier 6pt, 5pt, 4pt, 3pt, 2pt, and 1pt in cost. ITEM CARD ~MY ORIGINAL ITEM, but you may copy: Advanced Cloning Entity (ACE): a nanotechnology robot with the ability to create copies of itself out of materials given to it. It is capable of taking any form, hacking into computers, and disguising themselves as machines. They adapt and learn quite easily but have a type of hivemind. if one gets a virus it is usually deleted rather quickly

shake up Hogwarts ~! wooooohooooo~!

other than that it's a very good chapter that you have put up.

question, when is his eyes going to hurt from being allowed full sight? Gojo Satoru wears a blindfold because his eyes can cause him physical pain without an obstruction. it is also why he wears blackout glasses, which can't be seen through because of the pitch black color.

I think it will be great to have Cortana dating Jarvis it will be so cute and adorable to read

#2 please.

maybe a requirement for summons to be summoned is 100% loyalty to their summoner

Isekai ~~~~~~!!!!!!!!

I'm going to be honest, I don't think it is going to be a huge difference at this point to rewrite it. Also, like that one person said, rewrite it when you get burnt out on the story. Plus, you could say that it was everything he could think of att the time and that would make sense. One idea I have, is small Mechashift Guns for the Police Bots. Like Ruby's weapon in RWBY Anime looks somewhat like a skateboard without wheels when inactive, it can have the standby form, the gun form, and possibly a shield or barrier form when defending civilians from attacks. PS. Just consider my suggestion, this is your story and ultimately everything is up to you. regardless, this goes for everything I've said and not just the Mechashift weapon idea.

So far this is great, though I wonder if the two of them are going to form their own team or join the Avengers Initiative. though if they do form their own team, do the shadows count as workers? Thanks to Cortana he could easily reveal which ones in shield are Hydra or spies. plus she can potentially free those hypnotized as soldiers like Bucky, Steve's old friend . I just remembered the autobots, would they be allowed to join the team that they are in? Tony would probably be rather shocked. Just an idea, what happens if Mechashift Weapons are brought in? (from the RWBY anime)

the sixteen Evil Pieces from Highschool DxD... . familiar egg... . character card for Tony Stark... . Deed to an old manor outside of town... . 1d10 giant's handfuls of cash (USD)... . Fridge with respawning food and drinks... . a bottomless bag, from Harry Potter... . character card for an Inherent Iris Unit, from the Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha movies... . a cup of the water of life... . magic textbooks... . a character card for white/black/red mage or other rpg character classes... . a magical restaurant carry-out box that respawns highly nutritional food based on a health scan of the person opening it... ... a blueprint/recipe for anything... . Cultivation textbook... . IDK what else ... good story so far

This is off to a decent start. Whenever you continue this, I will read more.

This is very interesting, what will he get from the boxes, I wonder. If you are taking suggestions, then I'd suggest a total concentration breathing style and a blade of some sort attuned to him. Something to consider is having the OC be ten years younger so he can join Yuji, Megumi, and Nobara in high school.