Hello, and thank you for your comment. While you’re absolutely correct about the idea of being a doctor, you need to take into account the shinobi society. Although it might sound harsh, they are assassins—tools designed to complete missions. In this world, someone who can kill is often seen as more valuable than someone who can heal. Secondly, think about how others perceive the MC’s potential. While he may intend to use his ability for healing, others might see it as a powerful weapon. And third, in a world where anyone can kill you without a weapon—where their own bodies and chakra are deadly—you have to be stronger than them if you want to protect what you love. These are my impressions and ideas, and I completely understand if you disagree. Thank you for your feedback; it helps me view my chapters from another perspective and improve. AraXiel_21
Hi, good day. First of all, thank you for your review and for your various comments on the different chapters. I truly appreciate the time you’ve taken to read and share your thoughts. I understand that you disagree with several aspects of the story, and I want to make it clear that I genuinely value feedback like yours, as it helps me improve. Regarding Yasuke’s mental maturity, this is something I plan to explore further as the story progresses. Without giving away too much, there are specific reasons behind his behavior that will be addressed and explained in more detail. I hope that, when that moment comes, you’ll understand the intention behind this aspect of the character. As for the Ope Ope no Mi, I believe it’s reasonable for such a powerful ability to have a high cost, especially given Yasuke’s current state as a civilian ninja with average chakra levels at best. His exhaustion reflects his current limitations, but as he trains and grows, his chakra reserves and control will naturally improve, making it easier for him to manage his abilities over time. Regarding the illness, let me clarify: it’s not cancer. It’s a different condition unique to the ninja world. Without spoiling too much, I can say it’s something that would only occur in this universe, and more context will be provided later in the story. As for the lack of hints, there were subtle mentions—such as Nora’s difficulty with chakra use—that foreshadowed her condition. These details will become more relevant as the story develops. Once again, thank you for taking the time to share your thoughts. I hope you continue to enjoy the story and that some of your doubts and critiques find resolution as the plot unfolds. I’m always open to hearing more suggestions or comments. Best regards, AraXiel_21
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It is my first work, I put a lot of affection and effort into each chapter and although I procrastinate a little, I hope that the others also like it. Thank you for your support
Dear readers, First and foremost, I want to thank you for your continued support and enthusiasm for my fanfic. Getting to chapter 40 has been an incredible journey, and your feedback is invaluable to me. I've noticed that chapter 8 has generated some mixed reactions, and I want to take a moment to address your concerns and share a bit of the reasoning behind the decisions I made in that chapter. In chapter 8, the questions presented in the test may have seemed too simple or out of place within the context of a serious ninja exam. However, my intention in writing that scene was twofold. On one hand, I wanted to create a moment of comic relief, something that would lighten the tension a bit and give the characters and you, the readers, a break. On the other hand, the simplicity of the questions served a specific purpose in developing the relationship between Yasuke and Tsume. Yasuke, who up until this point had shown a lot of confidence in his intellectual abilities, suddenly finds himself baffled by what seem like obvious answers, but which hadn't crossed his mind. This not only serves to remind Yasuke (and all of us) of the importance of humility, but also to underline that the simplest answers are sometimes the most accurate. Through these interactions, I wanted to show a more human and less predictable side of the characters, enriching their team dynamic. I understand that the choice to present such simple questions may not have been to everyone's liking, and I apologize if that caused any frustration. I assure you that every decision in the narrative has a purpose, and I greatly appreciate your feedback, as it helps me improve as a writer and ensure that the story remains entertaining and coherent. I'm going to review the chapter and see how I can adjust it so that the intention behind those scenes is clearer, without losing the essence of what I wanted to convey. I deeply appreciate your patience and commitment to this story. Thank you for being with me on this journey, and I hope you continue to enjoy what's to come! With gratitude, AraXiel_21
Thank you for your comment, it is an interesting point of view. The depiction of Yasuke as less mature despite his experience as an adult and surgeon is intended to explore how his regression to childhood could affect his psychology and behavior in unexpected ways, also showing that traumas and fears are not unique to childhood, Since there is evidence that adults and older people maintain these traumas throughout their lives. Furthermore, this characterization attempts to add depth and complexity to his development, showing that maturity is not always linear and can be influenced by various psychological and emotional factors. I appreciate your perspective and it's definitely something to think about and delve into further in future narratives.
-Minato, you were following me! I could have seen her if it weren't for you! -Yasuke exclaimed, his voice tinged with anger and reproach.
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Sorry for the misunderstandings during the translation, my understanding of English is not good and I rely on a translator, because of this there may be misunderstandings, confusion and translation errors. I appreciate if you point out the errors to improve the quality of the work.
The two boys turned their gazes towards the direction where the voice came from, they saw three girls, in the middle a girl with light brown hair and glasses looked at Yasuke with a frown, at his sides two girls a little taller than the last one, looked at the scene with laughter, the blue one looked with a sweet smile, while the one with brown hair and wild looked at him with mischief and mockery
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Sorry for the misunderstandings during the translation, my understanding of English is not good and I rely on a translator, because of this there may be misunderstandings, confusion and translation errors. I appreciate if you point out the errors to improve the quality of the work.
-Perhaps I can use 'Shambles' to simulate Kawarimi no Jutsu," Yasuke thought to himself, planning his next move cautiously.
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Hello and thank you so much for reading and commenting on my story! As for the chunin protecting the matron: the explanation is simple. Although the chunin are partially tasked with protecting her, their presence is related to certain events and background that will be revealed in the upcoming chapters. Also, the chunin are usually stationed at the hospital because it is one of the most critical locations in the village and serves as a center for medical and strategic operations. That is why the hospital receives constant protection. As for the matron, let's just say that there are specific reasons why she is given special treatment, which will become clearer as the story progresses. Now, about the substitution jutsu, you are partly right and I appreciate you pointing it out. The substitution jutsu works by replacing the user's body with a nearby object, effectively preventing an attack. At higher levels, users can combine it with the transformation jutsu to enhance the distraction effect. However, in this case, Minato, as a beginner, is not yet able to combine these techniques. As for the cloning aspect, I'm not sure where that interpretation came from, I'd like some clarification to improve my understanding. Lastly, you are right in thinking that Minato technically shouldn't have access to such an advanced jutsu yet. However, let's not forget that Minato is a natural prodigy and an exceptional genius, traits that will eventually lead him to become one of the youngest kages in history. I admit that this was my first attempt at writing a battle scene and I wanted to give a little nod to his future development and the resemblance to his eventual mastery of the Hiraishin technique. I hope this clears things up. Thanks again for your comments - they are incredibly helpful in improving the story and the way I present these details. Best regards, AraXiel_21
Rebirth in Konoha: The Leaf Surgeon
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