Maybe if start by making him not too much op in the beging because time and space are very op and if you want to make it op make it Limited by adding timer on the skills ..... and make it more life IDK how to I explain it to you but I will try.... by adding A description of the places of things and palaces and if there is an academy..and there are dungeon... try to add a villain is not very strong but grows with the hero but the hero does not know that he is the villain You can also add in the next stages of the story dimensions beyond the description that exists for now... if you like .. You can use an element like blood too because there is little use there are a lot of ideas but I think I can help you
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Primordial God Of Time
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