I find the story interesting! When Jenny’s backstory was shown, I find it quite sad. Being independent at a young age and not growing in the presence of a biological family can have an impact to a person, even if it’s in real life. I’ve read several chapters, and Gabriel being a part of Jenny’s life from years back is a big mystery, and the curiosity that it gives makes me want to read further (and I will). I’m sure more interesting events will unfold in the next chapters. Looking forward to it! <3
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This part makes me curious! Can't wait to find out who this is. <3
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I like how Alex is motivated to become king. It shows the character's strong determination to achieve what he wants. This story partly reminds me of ATLA. There are a few missed punctuations and repeated words, but I'm sure that it'll be great as the story unfolds. ✨
Thanks for the review! ❤️ I'll look up my minor errors and I appreciate that you pointed out its strength and room for improvement. It'll help me know how I can improve my work. 😊
In the first few chapters, I've already seen how the author reveals the kind of world the non-human characters have little by little. I find it intriguing, because I saw the details of how they looked like, and it leaves me imagining how the characters look like. Well done! I'm sure that there will be more interesting events. Hoping for the best for your work! 👏
Thanks for the comment! I appreciate it. 😊
At first I found it strange that, 'wait, there's no groom, just a wheelchair' but that sense of mystery is catchy. The protagonist had a rough family events, turning her to make big decisions in one go (signing without reading). I find it interesting because the further events are intriguing. I'll keep reading! ❤️
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Lancelot Real is known to be the restaurant’s head chef – but behind his impressive performance is a secret job of his at night – being a killer, for he was raised to be one. With darkness seen in him, Evangeline, a bright, cheerful and empathetic person, sees the need to pull him out of ‘dark.’ He knew that love is a luxury he can’t afford and knew that his love for Evangeline was wrong from the very beginning – because he was the one who was tasked to kill Evangeline’s relative. Will love keep no records of wrongs, or justice will prevail? ------ Genre: Romance/Crime Status: COMPLETED50 Chs 3 Sammlungen
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A Thousand Pieces of Us.
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Amethyst Monteverde is the daughter of a CEO of a powerful company who's engaged to Vaughn and is looking forward to the day of her wedding. She ran away after seeing an incident that made her think twice about her marriage. She had an accident out of reckless driving due to her emotional outburst and was rescued by Shawn, who's passionate to help the poor and needy. Amethyst, who no longer sees the sense of living, begged Shawn to help her run away with him out of desperation. Unaware that Shawn is her sister's ex, will Shawn let her join his mission in the countryside to reach out for the poor? Or will she return to Vaughn who only has a few months left to live? // Status: COMPLETED Genre: Romance43 Chs 13 Sammlungen
Thanks for the review! I truly appreciate it. ❤️
A Thousand Pieces of Us.
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