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I would have given it a chance but i won’t because of the huge harem so maybe you can improve on. three harem members is more then enough

Very well written so far and i like the comedy too so keep up the great work my brother or sister or just my slime

It’s sound very good but upload more chapters

Don’t lie author u got inspired to write this by custom made demon king but that’s fine but i can’t lie focus more on plot then sex and intimacy

Also please don’t kill the ff by making it a Porno where he Has 70+ girls so please make it 3 harem members max and if you want content then make him cheat stealthly

It’s Really cold so don’t drop it and keep uploading so it get’s people’s attention because most people you’ll rather read something that’s 60+ because otherwise it’s too small and most people find new fanfics from updates

I’d read if there were more chapters but yh

Good novel just keep it up brosky……………….

Not gonna lie this is very trash for a villain ff and not to mention that mc is extremely childish but the grammar and writing quality is good I’ll begrudge give you that

Can you change the mc picture because he looks like a femboy

Sigh why aren’t you uploading

Very good novel talking from chapter 200 but why isn’t it getting updated

Not gonna lie you are focusing on the blood mage way too much and you’re leaving this unupdated when it’s the one people want most

His personality is nothing like madara and not to mention the many grammatical mistakes but what really got to me is how you made madara's pride and unbendable will and tyrant like persona non existent plus you made him a little submissive follower

But don’t try be too poetic and put in a lot of pov on one scenario because it’s pretty annoying

Keep up the great work you’re a legend

Although there are some grammar mistakes on the first 70 chaps but the story is very well fleshed out and the character feel real especially endev and shoto and one of the things that made me give this a chance was the start to be honest where the reincarnation wasn’t some ballshit rob or system that ruins immersion and makes no sense but was although mysterious but understandable that there is a possibility of failure at reincarnating

Hello author Can you please fix up the grammar