Chaos_Immortal_909

Chaos_Immortal_909

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2022-07-25 Beigetreten Global
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Chaos_Immortal_909
Chaos_Immortal_909
27 days ago
Posted

Author is mc is naive, idiot, beta pathetic, good guy, righteous, self righteous?

Chaos_Immortal_909
Chaos_Immortal_909
1 months ago
Replied to Rene_Tokiori

he's already getting arrogant, smh. maybe he's just trying to see his own limits

The battle raged on, a whirlwind of steel and shadow. Sparks erupted like miniature constellations as dark aura clashed with the blue barrier emanating from Draven's armour. Each clash resonated with a bone-jarring boom, the very air crackling with raw energy. David, a blur of light and obsidian darkness, weaved through Draven's attacks with an inhuman agility. Yet, every strike, no matter how precise or ferocious, seemed to be absorbed by the ever-strengthening defence. Draven, on the other hand, grew more imposing with each passing moment, his movements gaining a calculated confidence that spoke volumes of his experience in weathering such storms.

THE GENERAL'S DISGRACED HEIR

THE GENERAL'S DISGRACED HEIR

Fantasy · Rene_Tokiori

Chaos_Immortal_909
Chaos_Immortal_909
1 months ago
Replied to Rene_Tokiori

Oh I see, so there was really something at play here

A bewildered stutter escaped Seraphina's lips. "Wa-wa-wa-wa-what?" she stammered, a blush blooming on her neck and spreading like wildfire across her face. "Did you just…? You can't be serious, right?" A nervous giggle bubbled up, a desperate attempt to mask the fluttering in her chest. "Surely, you jest, young lord. Five centuries have etched their lines upon me, a far cry from the vibrant youth you might seek."

THE GENERAL'S DISGRACED HEIR

THE GENERAL'S DISGRACED HEIR

Fantasy · Rene_Tokiori

Chaos_Immortal_909
Chaos_Immortal_909
1 months ago
Commented

Why isn't he using his new technique??? the one with Qi????

The battle raged on, a whirlwind of steel and shadow. Sparks erupted like miniature constellations as dark aura clashed with the blue barrier emanating from Draven's armour. Each clash resonated with a bone-jarring boom, the very air crackling with raw energy. David, a blur of light and obsidian darkness, weaved through Draven's attacks with an inhuman agility. Yet, every strike, no matter how precise or ferocious, seemed to be absorbed by the ever-strengthening defence. Draven, on the other hand, grew more imposing with each passing moment, his movements gaining a calculated confidence that spoke volumes of his experience in weathering such storms.

THE GENERAL'S DISGRACED HEIR

THE GENERAL'S DISGRACED HEIR

Fantasy · Rene_Tokiori

Chaos_Immortal_909
Chaos_Immortal_909
1 months ago
Commented

five centuries and she's still a master rank??? ain't she too trashy? unless I'm speaking out of ignorance and there's another reason.

A bewildered stutter escaped Seraphina's lips. "Wa-wa-wa-wa-what?" she stammered, a blush blooming on her neck and spreading like wildfire across her face. "Did you just…? You can't be serious, right?" A nervous giggle bubbled up, a desperate attempt to mask the fluttering in her chest. "Surely, you jest, young lord. Five centuries have etched their lines upon me, a far cry from the vibrant youth you might seek."

THE GENERAL'S DISGRACED HEIR

THE GENERAL'S DISGRACED HEIR

Fantasy · Rene_Tokiori

Chaos_Immortal_909
Chaos_Immortal_909
1 months ago
Commented

Luna is a part of his skill so her kills should count as his.

As the duo embraced one another, a holographic window materialized in the air before David, emblazoned with the triumphant words: "[You have defeated a master]." "[You have defeated a master]."

THE GENERAL'S DISGRACED HEIR

THE GENERAL'S DISGRACED HEIR

Fantasy · Rene_Tokiori

Chaos_Immortal_909
Chaos_Immortal_909
1 months ago
Replied to sleepygood

Indeed, even the previous maid he slept with suffered from the same syndrome😭😭 I just hope not all the women in the future chapters will suffer from this syndrome.

An unexpected warmth bloomed in David's own chest. This wasn't just about power and control anymore. A silent bond, a tentative trust, was starting to form between them. Perhaps, with time, this master-servant relationship could evolve into something more.

THE GENERAL'S DISGRACED HEIR

THE GENERAL'S DISGRACED HEIR

Fantasy · Rene_Tokiori

Chaos_Immortal_909
Chaos_Immortal_909
1 months ago
Commented

Sigh, this's what I call an NPC character development. it's so sudden with no weight. Don't tell me having intercourse with him made her to change, that's ain't logical, unless she suffering from a mental illness like Stockholm syndrome or something.

It was Shay, her auburn hair cascading down her back like a waterfall of earth-like silk. But something about her was different. Gone was the timid girl he'd known. In its place, a gentle warmth radiated from her chestnut eyes as she leaned closer, her voice a soothing melody. "Young master," she whispered, her touch as light as a butterfly's wing, "you're finally awake."

THE GENERAL'S DISGRACED HEIR

THE GENERAL'S DISGRACED HEIR

Fantasy · Rene_Tokiori

Chaos_Immortal_909
Chaos_Immortal_909
1 months ago
Commented

The poetic writing style is killing me😭😭 I'm shocked at how did I manage to read till this chapter💀 The mc already started thinking with his lower brain💀 Tbh I can't see myself reading this novel till the end, if it stays like this of course.

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THE GENERAL'S DISGRACED HEIR

THE GENERAL'S DISGRACED HEIR

Fantasy · Rene_Tokiori

Chaos_Immortal_909
Chaos_Immortal_909
1 months ago
Replied to Icathian

Lil shyt

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