T_mido

T_mido

male LV 2

Hello guys i write my first original novel and i need support so i can continue. Help me to improve my writing skill , thank you very much

2022-06-29 Beigetreten France
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T_mido
T_mido
2 years ago
Replied to Ahmet_el

Yes Ahmet is a little bit stronger than dave but i think darken is the strongest

T_mido
T_mido
2 years ago
Replied to Jhon_Whick

Thank you sir continue enjoying my novel 🙏

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T_mido
2 years ago
Replied to Alain_wind

Thank you 🙏 Enjoy it please

T_mido
T_mido
2 years ago
Posted

An interesting book l'd say... No much info ,dumps and easy yet good grammar usage IM not very fun of romance stories but i like this one. Just keep a steady update time and try your best… I highly recommend this book to other readers.

T_mido
T_mido
2 years ago
Posted

An interesting book l'd say... No much info dumps and easy yet good grammar usage iguess I've got to be patient with the author. Just keep a steady update time and try your best… I highly recommend this book to otherreaders.

T_mido
T_mido
2 years ago
Replied to Missy_Castillo

Yes for the first three chaptres i tried to introduce my world to readers , i agree with you about the dialogues but all that changed after thank you your advises are precious to me

T_mido
T_mido
2 years ago
Replied to Abdulfatah_Fatima

Oh thank you

T_mido
T_mido
2 years ago
Replied to Missy_Castillo

Okay i will thank you

After 600 years now most people did not believe in this stories and said that just the king's family use this story to make people believe that they are the son's of whom protected this world.

The Salvation : The legend of the westland

The Salvation : The legend of the westland

Fantasy · T_mido

T_mido
T_mido
2 years ago
Replied to Riad_Belhaj

Thank you

T_mido
T_mido
2 years ago
Posted

An interesting book l'd say... No much info dumps and easy yet good grammar usage For now I guess I've got to bepatient with the author. Just keep a steady update time and try yourbest… I highly recommend this book to other readers.

  • The Salvation : The legend of the westland original

    The Salvation : The legend of the westland

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE ROMANCE MAGIC HAREM TRAGEDY BETRAYAL HISTORICAL WIZARDS

    4.84

    In a world of wars and betrayals, a world of racism and injustice, a world that applies the law of the jungle, a world ruled by force, only the strong write history. Religions and beliefs multiplied, and there were many gods, each sect believes in the god it deems powerful. The strong been worshiped and the weak waits for someone to protect him ,All this has produced for us one belief that has become one of the pillars in all religions. Most religions adopt the idea of ​​the "Savior", which claims in short that the world will remain full of evil and corruption until the appearance of the "Savior" who will fill the earth with justice and equity... Perhaps our problem on this earth is that most people are waiting for someone to come to fix their societies, instead of doing it. This is the story of the man who came from the western land and became the "Savior" only to destroy this belief. The man who thirsts for power reached its highest levels, and there he found the absolute truth behind what is called good and evil. How did he transform from a hero and king looking for justice to a man thirsting for power and revenge, from an innocent man to a man who might stain his fists with the blood of the gods if necessary, from a weak man to a man who rules the heavens and what is below.

    45 Chs 40 Sammlungen