understood i will try to meet your expectations 🦉
"Umm, mister Kurayami may I know where you are taking me" Ryo said with a sense of humility in his voice while a drop of sweat dripped down his cheeks and as he gave a fake smile.
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😂😂😂 yes it is
Chapter 8: RUN
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😂😂😂😂 i will edit it then thanks i will keep improving
Ryo felt abandoned but didn't let that quench the fire that is his will to survive. With both determination and fear, he runs faster once again. But it seemed that this time it wouldn't be as easy as running away. One of the zombies leaps at him with the intent to kill and almost rips off Ryo's head with a swift bite but thankfully, Ryo is able to dodge it before it hits him. One after the other the zombies leaped at him like a ferocious pride of lions going after a single gazelle. One of the zombies chooses to attack his legs but Ryo notices and leaps backward to avoid it. From the frying pan into the fire. One could say that this sentence best describes what happens next. When Ryo leaped backward, before he could hit the ground he saw an especially monstrous-looking zombie. This one had bone covering its body with bone spikes coming out of parts of its body and stood at a staggering height of three meters. Its skin color was brown and its eyes were sparkling red rubies, it also had long black hair. The most noticeable feature of this zombie was its gigantic right hand which had no fingers but only one large spike. It wore its bones like a set of armor from a horror film and this zombie's gender seemed to be male. With just a look, Ryo could tell that this particular zombie was way more powerful than the others. After examining the zombie from the air, Ryo finally reaches the ground and lands face-to-face with the monster.
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thanks 😊 i actually plan to redo most of the beginning chapters i will take your advice to heart and once again thanks for reading
thanks man
understood
The man wore an obsidian with silver cloth outline military uniform covered in green and dark-brown camo patterns and on top of that uniform was an obsidian and silver outline cloak.
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this is really good. can i use this?
The man wore an obsidian with silver cloth outline military uniform covered in green and dark-brown camo patterns and on top of that uniform was an obsidian and silver outline cloak.
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also. could u give the book a general review. i wanna know what u think.
true very true
thanks fam
Gud virus
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