GunpowderGundam

GunpowderGundam

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2022-06-28 Beigetreten India
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GunpowderGundam
GunpowderGundam
3 months ago
Replied to Thakur_Abhay_3246

why not feel anger at your mom and watch man for allowing you to be born?

The old man nodded slowly, though his eyes were hollow. Rohan could see that the man was losing hope, and he felt a surge of anger at the world for allowing this to happen, and anger at himself for not being able to do more, faster.

A New India

A New India

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GunpowderGundam
GunpowderGundam
3 months ago
Commented

subtle

Truman's voice was calm but firm. "Prime Minister Varma, the United States understands the gravity of the situation in India. We recognize the strategic importance of your nation in this turbulent period. While our support must be carefully calibrated, I assure you that we will provide humanitarian aid to help alleviate the immediate crisis. However, we must also discuss your country's position in the Cold War context."

A New India

A New India

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GunpowderGundam
GunpowderGundam
3 months ago
Commented

This feels like it is going on too fast. Why is the exposition only delivered through a dialogue? Also, it is difficult to keep track of things that are going on and it feels like you are skipping important details about crucial topics. The non-alignment and aid by both sides alone deserve a couple of chapters. politicians are lazy and there is no way events happen this fast.

GunpowderGundam
GunpowderGundam
3 months ago
Commented

un was barely established at this point

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A New India

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GunpowderGundam
GunpowderGundam
3 months ago
Commented

All in a few hours? You need to work on your time scaling and stake escalation Clautic

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A New India

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GunpowderGundam
GunpowderGundam
3 months ago
Commented

the weaponry India had at that time was quite good really. Sure, the logistics capacity was shit, but with all the disarmament going on, the royal Indian forces were equipped with top of the line ww2 era setups .

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GunpowderGundam
GunpowderGundam
3 months ago
Commented

Parchment. Parchment. What century is this? 12th?

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GunpowderGundam
GunpowderGundam
4 months ago
Replied to GodOfCulture69

you are the one who is wierd

GunpowderGundam
GunpowderGundam
6 months ago
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GunpowderGundam
6 months ago
Replied to THIRD_EYE

oh my.

  • Heir of an empire: 1538 India. original

    Heir of an empire: 1538 India.

    History ACTION ADVENTURE REINCARNATION KINGDOMBUILDING CONQUER HISTORICAL NO-HAREM

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    This is the story of an empire in the making. This is a story of a small kingdom, fighting to mark its place in the annals of history. With a man who had died twice as its leader, will it make an impact? Or will it be forgotten? Setting: The story takes place on an alternate earth, where the events have differed from what happened in ours. The events of the story start from the year 1538 AD, following the journey of Rudra Deva, a transmigrator, and his kingdom as it grows in the Indian subcontinent. Disclaimer: Do not take anything in this novel as a historical fact. The author is not a historian. The views taken by this novel's characters do not represent the Author's views. This is just a work of fiction. Any resemblances to real-world historical incidents or people are entirely coincidental and arise solely from the author's imagination. Reader discretion is advised.

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