subtle
Truman's voice was calm but firm. "Prime Minister Varma, the United States understands the gravity of the situation in India. We recognize the strategic importance of your nation in this turbulent period. While our support must be carefully calibrated, I assure you that we will provide humanitarian aid to help alleviate the immediate crisis. However, we must also discuss your country's position in the Cold War context."
History · Clautic
This feels like it is going on too fast. Why is the exposition only delivered through a dialogue? Also, it is difficult to keep track of things that are going on and it feels like you are skipping important details about crucial topics. The non-alignment and aid by both sides alone deserve a couple of chapters. politicians are lazy and there is no way events happen this fast.
un was barely established at this point
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History · Clautic
All in a few hours? You need to work on your time scaling and stake escalation Clautic
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the weaponry India had at that time was quite good really. Sure, the logistics capacity was shit, but with all the disarmament going on, the royal Indian forces were equipped with top of the line ww2 era setups .
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History · Clautic
Parchment. Parchment. What century is this? 12th?
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History · Clautic
you are the one who is wierd
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History · Jeet_1993
oh my.
why not feel anger at your mom and watch man for allowing you to be born?
The old man nodded slowly, though his eyes were hollow. Rohan could see that the man was losing hope, and he felt a surge of anger at the world for allowing this to happen, and anger at himself for not being able to do more, faster.
A New India
History · Clautic