Good but always heard its better to give more detail
Great piece of work done, the writing is sublime and the story is very good. Keep going author, don't know why you don't have more views though
Really is a great work, the writing is amazing, the world-building is quite something, to say the least as it is very special. You seem to update fairly frequently at that and you can really explain the characters well.
"Holy shit dude, you are the perfect trap. Not only do you look like a girl but you also sound like one. Ain't no way."
The hymn of vivshi
Fantasy · HotAsianBoy
Well first off the explaination of the world background needs to be addressed, and i’d like it if you gave more detail into how characters, backgrounds and objects looked but other than that the writing is pretty great and you update quite consistently ffrom what I can see. So just keep going
Bro sounds like his on some coke😂
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The hymn of vivshi
Fantasy · HotAsianBoy
Great start, writing is great but confusing at times. Characters are great and a great first chapter.
Writing is great, story and chaacters are good has a lot of potential
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Very good read, writing is awesome and the characters are very nice, hope to see more chapters
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original Devil’s Dominon
4.56
Devil’s Dominion is a story based in the year 3000, with humans dwindling in faith for the gods and even the devils, after realizing they're the sons of the devil, Kinea and Kean find themselves in the realm of the undead to escape from the clutches of their true father and to find their old one. With the world demons slowly infiltrating the real world it's up to them to stop them while training and finding clues of their father along with uncovering mysteries through the world. A war is brewing the final war in history to decide who will survive, who will win good or evil, right or wrong, gods or devils. Will the twins even find their father before it’s too late28 Chs 18 Sammlungen
- original
Blue Lock X Inazuma
A year after the blue lock 11 won Japan u-20 and inazuma won the world tournament, the two sides meet to see who is truly the better team. How will Isagi, Bachira and all the blue lock 11 face against Mark Evan’s team. Will Inazuma learn what it means to truly have an Ego, Will Axel obtain his. Sit back and enjoy4 Chs 47 Sammlungen
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The War ending
3.95 Abgeschlossen
2 fraternal twins from the country Japan just so happen to be the sons to the king of hell. With their father using all means possible to bring them over to the side of evil, against the final war in history, secrets unravel as battle against humans, gods, devils and much more fight for order13 Chs 9 Sammlungen
Good start kinda feels like rick riordan novels though