Mafia_Kid

Facts!

Lol my bad I just unlocked chapter 59 and it's 145 words of you telling us what to buy you and that you'll stop asking and the stats will end but the nonsense filler will be until chapter 66. What a joke..smh... a coin and a half wasted on that?!. Please I hope you did what you say after chapter 66, but let me guess you give us last 5 paragraphs in beginning of chapters after chapter 66?

Way to speak facts 💯! Never seen an author like this in my life.

Not to hate, but Imma hate. Why you say to skip to Chapter 72 around Chapter 57 or 58 if it got changed at 60? If not the soliciting for money or stats filler, what did you fill the chapters with then?

My bad I forgot about all the coins wasted with you telling us for all the chapters that you won't be soliciting us for money in each chapter. chapter 59 over 50 words and that was a light one that's half a coin 🪙 ✨️ 🚮🔥.

Yeah it may be your's, but even you know it doesn't deserve 5 stars. In comment chapters people were begging you to stop the stats and your response was its hard to get 1200 words in the chapter, but you're trying. Call me out if I typed a lie but we both know I didn't. Then ask yourself is it really worth 5 stars then????

Just seems like the author is just hungry for money. (as he solicits for it in every chapter). 75% of chapters are filled with nothing, but characters just talking about nothing to push the story forward. I don't care fir the author's response on this as bro you have stated many times you need to buy a PS4 and then a PS5, hence all the stats at the end of all the paid chapters, and the last two paragraphs at the beginning of the next chapter. Never seen someone so money hungry that they'd actually push away their readers before. Will admit the story had/has potential if it wasn't for the author getting in his own way for a dollar. Thanks for at least telling us we can skip to chapter 72 so we don't have to self skip as I've found myself having to do like the 4 chapters of MC just getting on the train and getting directions to his room. Let me guess you did a double stat at the end of those chapters too to get to 1200 words SMH. I got lucky and used a gift card so its money being wasted, but not money I earned with hard work or I'd be really mad. I'm gonna skip like he posted to skip because even he knows he's just filling in a bunch of nonsense. Also someone asked about the mom situation and the author's response was? You guessed it give me money and buy privilege and I'll tell you LOL what a ....!

No Lie! I actually use coins to unlock your chapters, also give you power stones amd golden tickets, would never for this (NMPV). It's free pass or not reading it for me(NMPV). He will leave a cliff hanger on a chapter and forget to go back to it. As an author how about he make a plan on the direction he wants his story to go rather than what seems like he is writing a chapter the day of release for whatever he thought of that day. SMH. Oh and tell your fellow author to stop lying in his responses, saying he will get better or become more frequent with releases, lol, he just released a new book, but the releases will become more frequent for this one(NMPV)? Laughable at best like his writing.