Didn't expect him to be this young given his maturity 🤔
There were only a few students already seated in Grade 6, Class 1. Han Yichen walked to the third seat in the middle row and sat down. His desk mate hadn't arrived yet. They had their first term examinations coming up in a few days and everyone was trying to revise for it.
They Become One
Urban · Su_Jeong
Such a good son 😊
Han Yichen put his arms around her and patted her back as he said, "You're safe now Mom, it's alright". He wasn't new to this, as she had been having the same nightmares for as long as he could remember.
They Become One
Urban · Su_Jeong
Easy to read and a refreshing point of view from a young girl. Quite a relaxing story. Maybe make the chapters longer so we don't finish so fast.
Very interesting plot. The writing had little grammar but most importantly, the format could be worked on a little. There are large paragraphs that could've been broken into four or five. The reading flowed very well and easy to read. I noticed a lot of the times, the narration is telling too much instead of showing but no big deal. I like how the tone is perfect. It's mysterious and dark with a tad of humor. All the characters were also very developed. Overall, this novel had a really strong potential.
Wow!! Just wow!! 👏👏 I felt every single emotion Cynthia was feeling and I loved every revenge act she was acting on her ex-husband. It's like a very satisfying novel of karma and return slap. MUAHAHAHA First of all, the writing was extremely well done. There was barely any grammatical errors, the reading flowed really well and the descriptions were top-notch. This is a really great novel! SPOILER ALERT: . . . . I love how this revenge trope turned into a marriage contract trope 🤭.
LOL omg sorry for the mix up!!! I was reading a different novel and I even double check to make sure I got the right book name and character name. I love the name Sebastian btw!!
I read to chapter 7. I don't really read the mafia trope and don't know much, but I find the plot very unique and interesting. Especially the auctioning element. I really liked how Erika started out as a human trafficking slave. It makes their encounter very believable versus the other kinds of unrealistic meetings with mafias. Something I find inconsistent with Lacus's character is he doesn't know what he wants? Like he wants to be alone forever and remain cruel and evil, but he also wonders what it's like to have a true love? I find this contradiction repeatedly throughout the story and because of that his character isn't developed. The grammars make some parts of the story hard to follow, but I really do see potential in this novel to be something awesome!!!! 🤗
The synopsis could be a little better as I not find it relating to the story. The writing was very well done and better than I thought. I find both Drake and Jessica's background story unique and well developed. Can't wait to see what will happened between them!!
I have to be honest, this kind of trope is not really my cup of tea but the writing is very well done and holds attention. The descriptions and details are all there. The reading flows well and the character is interesting. Try to make the paragraphs bigger instead of one sentence.
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original Forever His (N_C)
Everything was peaceful and quiet for three years in Penrose Manor. The days had been filled with sunshine and flowers. That was, until the Young Master returned to take what was his. DARK ROMANCE [TRIGGER WARNING: CONTAINS MATURED CONTENT AND RAPE!] Read at your own risk!18 Chs 25 Sammlungen
We, too, want to know why 🤭
"President, it's not that I feel unconfident, but I just have to ask, why did you recommend me?
They Become One
Urban · Su_Jeong