Obsidians_smoke

Obsidians_smoke

male LV 4
2022-05-21 Beigetreten Brazil
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Pxe

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🇧🇷 Hephaestus is the best god among the Olympians. Can he build an aircraft, like those in fiction?

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🇧🇷 Unlucky protagonist that one...

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🇧🇷 Quaritch is crazy...

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🇧🇷 Technology is the best. 🇧🇷

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🇧🇷 This chapter seems shorter than the previous one. And where is the confrontation? Shouldn't that be the title of the chapter? Where is the fight? Where is the blood? Where is the confrontation? No offense, but all that time not writing has left you rusty, author. The chapter's sparse word count, shallow conversations, superficial descriptions, and numerous grammatical errors left much to be desired in this chapter. Don't be in a hurry to post the story. Just take your time to improve everything you can until you're happy with what you have. No one likes a rushed story. 🇧🇷

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🇧🇷 RIP Max Pattel. 🇧🇷

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🇧🇷 I'm totally on team Loona. The cute young adult hellhound is 100% in my concept. 🇧🇷