I greatly appreciate this feedback and I will take it into account moving forward, I do agree with you on the fact that he fails as a shadow. But I think I mislead or didn't show it properly but Keith believes that he will not fall in any danger as long as he evades the main characters, also he did take precautions but you will probably understand better in the next chapter, Also, the shadow part is what I'm about to write right now and it will focus more in revenge. I think I did lack a few common-sense facts and I apologize and will try to fix them as I move on. I always welcome any sort of feedback so I greatly appreciate you writing this for me.[img=recommend]
Although I can understand you not liking my novel, pls leave me some feedback so I am able to understand why you disliked it, so I can improve in the future. Thank you.
Thanks for the correction, I just fixed it.
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The Novel's Shadow
Fantasy · Onjou
That's a good point, thank you for the feedback.
Btw I will probably add it at the end of chapter 21 because I don't want to make a chapter just for stats but that is my preference and also Arthur might be getting something soon so his stats will change.
Of course.
Most likely but I might just make another character and make him learn it.
Don't worry, as I said before there would be another attack during the training arc of the original mc, which will be published real soon.
Since she is in the third year and Keith is 17 years old in the first year, Alicia is 19.
But I couldn't sleep and the only thought inside me was of how I was falling for a child. Well, he did look like a child but he was fun to be around and also had this sense around him that made him look mature.
The Novel's Shadow
Fantasy · Onjou
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original The Novel's Shadow
After dying, I opened my eyes to a new world, the world of a novel. With a new identity of a side character called Keith Devans, I will work in the shadows and help the protagonist whenever it is needed. Even with such a dream, the world of the novel is still dangerous for a side character like me so using the knowledge of the novel and obtaining some skills and talents I will become one of the strongest. Or so I hoped.62 Chs 116 Sammlungen
he is around 130 but just think of him as a small guy.
The Novel's Shadow
Fantasy · Onjou