SirKimbel

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2022-04-25 Beigetreten Global
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SirKimbel
SirKimbel
2 months ago
Posted

Despite this is the Author first novel it's not bad there are small mistakes, but so far nothing serious. He can slowly develop and can become better. I vote my trust in advance and gave 5 star for everything except the Stability of updates, that's honestly we are generous even with this 1 star. For new readers i advise wait at least a year, with this current update rate even with that you can read at best 200 plus chapter. Althoug there are a lot of privilage chapter once you unlock them and read it advance, you need to wait again a lot of time with the current 3-4ch/week so i don't think it's worth it. Some positive things: - Although the Mc has it own cheat, he still need to practice, to become strong, so he isn't op from the start -Other characters develop as well not just the MC, it's still in early phase, but we get some background for them -The world background has potential fot the future as well, when the Mc will be stronger, not just the current enemies like demons, exorcists, but probably later divine creatures, and abyss creatures as well will appear. Small mistakes: - MC despite being older than his current body sometimes really like a child and i not mean this like he try to deceive the adults, but the way he interacts with other kids. - The power system really need to be carefully keep in mind for the author, because there are not many levels, so the gap between level should be impossible to bridge. Oliver is different with his cheat, but for the others if Author keep pushing he will ruin the story. -Last one i hope the author won't make the characters stupid, this is not acceptable that a respectable war veteran old man lose his mind in rage because few worlds of the enemy, who is obviosuly doing it to bait and trap the war veteran. If this not enough even sell out information like candy. For the plot don't make them brain dead, it's much better if not just the Mc is smart but other characters as well. Scheming against each other, calculating, best option, interests based on benefits. Overall the story is great, this is the Author first novel and if he learn from the mistakes, this story truly can become something good to spend your time with it.

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SirKimbel
SirKimbel
5 months ago
Commented

Hahaha xd And after this Nadia walk on the path as a necromancer

If possible, she would have liked to touch it before its death, but she could do it after it died as well.

Obtaining 10x rewards! Reincarnated into a novel as a side-character!

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SirKimbel
SirKimbel
6 months ago
Replied to Owais_Khan_4634

That’s not a problem if only the privilage reader get the mass release. I can accept that, but at the very least normal readers should get that one daily ch. I always using my fast pass on this and it’s disapponting to see there is not even one ch for us.

SirKimbel
SirKimbel
2 years ago
Replied to Ahmad_Roshdy

Thank you for the explanation! Probably you are right, i didn't consider the fact they are come from a powerful clan. What i thought originally maybe only true to normal clan. Well let's say doesn't mater anyway because the yandere wife comando can burn the whole world if they become jealous in this case they are truly the most powerfull being. :DD #yandere

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SirKimbel
SirKimbel
2 years ago
Posted

Hello everyone! Here is my review: First of all, i have to say i was sceptical about this story because the harem tag but i tried it and didn't regret. This is not the typical harem story where MC go around pick up almost every girl he find and after few chapter leave them behind and later occasionally mention them to know they are still live and exist. So if you have doubts to read or not because the harem tag i advise you to try it. In this story the harem it's simply briliiant. I love all the woman character, they are all unique and have their special charteristics. Yandere, tsundere, crazy, cute, funny etc. The intresting thing not that i not hate harem because of this but i'm waiting when will a new girl come and will make the story more colorful. My personal favorite is Scathatch and Ophis ^^ The story background i think is rich there is plenty of room in it. After all there is the human/mortal realm where the MC originally come from, divine realm for gods and underworld/hell for demons/evil gods. If i understand well and in this case the story maybe have a lot of world/realm what we still don't know yet so the story can go on later with this. After all if vampires/werewolf has their own realm/world why can that what we don't no yet. The power level is what is a little questianable for me it's hard for me to follow how strong is Victor and not completly understand the count form. For example if Violet use the count form in theory her power level will be double, but if she 21 years old the double power is not only 42 years old vampire, how can she fought against someone who has the stregth to go against 500 years old vampire. Apart from this the story is almost perfect and i'm waiting what the future will bring.

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SirKimbel
SirKimbel
2 years ago
Commented

Being a vampire sounds good, but to not be able to eat normal food too bad. You won’t be able to feel different flavors. Well after all he need to lost something to gain something. 😄😁

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I think the urge to vomit was because my appetite changed? I try to put the pizza in my mouth and as expected, my body instantly rejects the food.

My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires.

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