Ok never mind he faked unconscious
"Here," another knight said, pointing toward the lake where Luci floated, motionless. "He's unconscious like the others."
The Demon Among The Knights
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Ok he’s so worried about them finding out he’s a demon but he’s not even trying to hide it. Leaving the one person who can tell them you beat the twins and have such destructive power alive is no better than saving Brianna and danial for no reason. “They will suspect me if I let them die” he says while being the only one awake when the army comes. Dosent make sense. It would be worse if he gets away with it.
"Pathetic," Luci muttered, kicking her limp form aside with disgust. "How am I supposed to kill someone who can't even stay awake?"
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This also dosent make sense. If he given them a unique nickname this would be reasonable. But “weak twins” ? If anyone decided to call them that they would accuse them of being their youngest brother? Also instead of using a random nickname for them to find out it’s their brother. Wouldn’t it be easier for them to recognize how he looks? Crimson eyes, hes all chained up with Merlin’s seals. Also the fact that their younger brother was sealed. Put two and two together and it’s obvious
"Wait a minute... the only one who calls us weak twins is—"
The Demon Among The Knights
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Ok. This just don’t even make sense. They are fighting heavens enemy’s. Their is no scale so far but apparently their supposedly strong and ima assume a random silver and gold ranked knight can’t handle them. Leaving only luci the random guy who almost broke a lengendary rank barrier the guy put up. Also when they wake up what’s the story hes gonna make up? They beat the demons and got knocked out? Their in the water the only one hurt is Brianna from the past injury. Other wise they took no damage??? No one would ever believe that
With a flick of his wrist, Luci caught their bodies mid-air, tossing them unceremoniously into the nearby lake. **Not because I care**, he thought as they splashed into the water, the cool liquid extinguishing the smoke rising from the scorched earth. **But if the knights suspect me, it'll be an annoyance.**
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1. It says the two heavens enemies are unconscious. Along with Brianna and Daniel. Meaning they are knocked out. Yet he fights the heavens enemy’s which is supposed to be his brother and sister (it keeps changing). 2. No where did it say how they got knocked out or how. Them being randomly knocked out is purely for sake of keeping his “mysterious race” a secret
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Wouldn’t this be the opposite. Seeing as his whole this is he was sealed away for years. Wouldn’t he hate traps? Especially if their is no way out??
Luci, who had been watching the scene unfold with quiet amusement, kept his thoughts to himself. **A trap? I love traps. Especially when I know there's no way out.** He dropped his weapons as well, though he knew they were unnecessary. His true strength didn't lie in mere steel.
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He alredy corrected him self.
Brianna's cold eyes met his, her voice as sharp as her sword. "My brother's name is Brian, not Brown," she corrected icily. "And yes, he let me."
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Did I miss something? This is the first time he’s called him by something other than his name
The swords were strapped securely to the side of Daniel's horse, wrapped in brown leather bindings. Without a word, Luci retrieved the blades, tossing them toward Daniel with a casual flick. "How many times do I have to tell you?" Luci asked, his voice dripping with feigned annoyance. "My name is Luci."
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What?? He’s said to be unmarried In terms of strength yet that battle nearly ended his life? When?? He didn’t get hit once. The only purpose for that random battle was to set up a common trope of a “evil demon saves their future lover. Realizing they are capable of good.” They went on a mission to kill demons. He watched her slaughter them easly until the last demon where he put her in a illusion. Where if she attacked the demon she attacked herself. That also contordicts the point of her stabbing her self to hurt the demon. And she being hurt by it
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How would he know they were weak??? If he was unconscious wouldn’t he have no knowledge of how strong they were?
Brian raised an eyebrow. "Weak? Brianna and Daniel could barely hold their own against them, and you're telling me they were weak?"
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