Love it, keep up the fantastic work. Amazing concept. Love it.
+1
(What should the Machine Spirit Of The Will Of The Dark be named? Yes, she is female as all ships are.)
Book&Literature · A_Real_Werewolf234
+1
Blake
For the love interest, I'm thinking like: Weiss, Pyrrha, or maybe even Blake. Defitnelly leaning more toward Weiss out of all of them. Any other character?
Anime & Comics · Simoa
Really good fan fiction, love the idea for the story. Keep up the good work.
Really like this, had a ton of potential. Keep up the fantastic work.
Love the idea and execution. Keep up the good work and upload more chapters. Also, great idea with the custodian.
Absolutely love it, the concept, and the idea of this fic. Only thing I recommend is to read over you chapter to proof read and check for mistakes. Keep fighting and improving your craft.
Jaune the Barbarian
Anime & Comics · Silverfang