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CaseysPen

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Just little ol' me with too much time on my hands, a really awesome fountain pen, an active imagination, and a fresh pad of paper. Instagram - CaseysPen1; Discord - CaseysPen#8300

2022-03-10 Beigetreten United States
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22 days ago
Commented

Nice setup for the next chapter.

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22 days ago
Posted

While the prologue is a little slow, Chapter 1 jumps into action quickly. I'd like to see a little more of the boy before he recovers. I think the contrast between the inflicted boy and the astute man would make for terrific character development. However, the ML comes across as strong and wise, someone I'd be willing to follow. I particularly appreciated how much the father cared for the boy and the efforts he took to protect him. Keep writing. This story has a lot of room for development and surprising twists and turns.

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CaseysPen
22 days ago
Commented

What did he do to deserve such punishment? Nice setup otherwise. Fast read with plenty of detail.

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2 months ago
Replied to aoi_hoshi_cath88

Aw, I should be the one giving you gifts. You've been so supportive. It helps keep me motivated to write more. Thank you so much for everything.

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2 months ago
Replied to Ariana_Sawyer

Working on that today. Thanks for the suggestion. I see now the extra spacing isn't doing the trick.

The Trigger was a trendy bar downtown. On a busy night, maybe a hundred people could squeeze in, but when I arrived, there were only about ten people hanging out.

Wife’s Bitter Revenge Against Neglectful CEO Husband

Wife’s Bitter Revenge Against Neglectful CEO Husband

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2 months ago
Replied to aoi_hoshi_cath88

Apparently, extra spaces between POV changes aren't working. I'll go back and add subheaders. See if that makes it clearer. Thanks.

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2 months ago
Replied to aoi_hoshi_cath88

My dear reader, you are my hero. Thank you for your corrections. I appreciate your eye for detail.

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2 months ago
Replied to Fauziamavi

Welcome back. Love your paragraph comments.

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3 months ago
Replied to Fauziamavi

Aw, how sweet. Thanks for enjoying.

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2 years ago
Replied to _BoredToDeath_

Not at all. Yeah, he's one of those dads.

Gay and sleeping beside her. Making babies with her. Fucking her. Telling her he loved her only to leave her with a note that hardly said more than it was all fake, and he couldn't do it anymore.

One and Done

One and Done

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  • Wife’s Bitter Revenge Against Neglectful CEO Husband original

    Wife’s Bitter Revenge Against Neglectful CEO Husband

    Urban WEAKTOSTRONG BETRAYAL REVENGE DRAMATIC FAMILY ENEMIESTOLOVERS LOVEAFTERMARRIAGE

    4.09 Kürzlich aktualisiert

    Teela married King Heavenly because she loved him, but life in the Heavenly household was anything but euphoric. Lettie, her hard-as-nails mother-in-law, treats her like an unpaid servant. The family treats her like an outsider. King treats her like a shadow, transparent and forgettable. When Lettie presses Teela to prove her value to the family or get out, Teela has a decision to make. But she’s not leaving without a fight. King Heavenly rules Heavenly Industries with an iron fist, but he leaves his home life to his mother to manage, and that includes the management of his boring little wife. Teela has never complained. She’s never done anything interesting, for that matter. She’s just one more responsibility in a long line of responsibilities that King shoulders on a daily basis, and that is exactly how he treats her — as a responsibility that he’s delegated to his mother. Suddenly Teela steps out of the shadows and into a fight with him and his whole family, and King is baffled by the ruthless actions of his now daring wife. He’d always heard that vengeance is a dish best served cold, but Teela is coming in hot!

    135 Chs 1.6k Sammlungen

  • One and Done original

    One and Done

    Urban R18 LOVEATFIRSTSIGHT FAMILY SEDUCTIVE COOLGUY KPOP ONENIGHTSTAND

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    Jessie just wanted a hot makeout session with a stranger for her fortieth birthday. A one and done, that's all he was only this stranger wouldn't go away. Between her night job at the bar and her day job at the bakery, she hardly had time to raise her teenage kids and lord knows she had nothing special to offer a man, especially this man. Her ex-husband had made sure you knew that all too well before he left her with tons of bills and too little money. Min Jun spent the best years of his life as a Korean pop star. Now he just wanted to hang out with friends and sleep in his own bed every night. His dreams were made up of all those normal things most people took for granted like love, marriage, and a family. Anonymity sounded like heaven, at least until he met Jessie. Now he redefined heaven as her lips on his. Too bad his bandmates disapproved of his choice. R-18 Want to stay updated with CaseysPen? Follow CaseysPen1 on Instagram or CaseysPen#8300 on Discord.

    196 Chs 81 Sammlungen

  • Demon CEO's Stormy Romance original

    Demon CEO's Stormy Romance

    Urban REVENGE CEO DRAMATIC ENEMIESTOLOVERS TWISTED

    Bailey played the perfect homemaker on social media. Known as Lori Laker, The Happy Homemaker, she purported that a housewife was no different from any small business owner. As such, the business of creating a blissful home life should be based on a solid business plan, solid professional alliances, and dynamite management skills. When she draws the attention of Chase Meadows, she is at a loss how to shake the determined CEO of the MGM Conglomerate without revealing secrets that could ruin her reputation. But there is absolutely no way she would ever tie herself to a man known as a demon in the business world with a world-renown reputation as emotionally unstable. He could be ice cold in business negotiations one minute and spewing dragon fire at an inept employee the next. Chase Meadows celebrated his thirty-fifth birthday alone with a bottle of Macallan’s whiskey and a rare steak. Life was good. He had exceeded his expectations and checked off every goal he had set for himself to reach before the age of forty—except for one. He always planned to marry and start a family by now. He wanted someone besides a housekeeper to come home to at night. He wanted a wife and two kids. Maybe a dog. He had tried to have a serious relationship before, but women annoyed him. More specifically, their expectations annoyed him. He wanted someone willing to take on the role of stay-at-home wife and mother without making spending his money a life’s goal. He wanted someone who put his happiness and needs first, someone who appreciated how hard he was willing to work for his family and rewarded him accordingly. He wanted someone to manage his household as efficiently as he managed his company. She should be healthy and bright and full of ideas but astute enough to know when to speak and when to accept his authority without question. When his personal assistant introduced him to the Happy Homemaker’s live stream, he was intrigued. When Chase ran into the same woman at a charity event and saw how succinctly she put a drunken date in his place, he knew she had the backbone to be his partner. The question was how to convince her.

    28 Chs 88 Sammlungen

  • Life with a Gargoyle original

    Life with a Gargoyle

    Fantasy COMEDY MAGIC SLICEOFLIFE TRAGEDY EGOIST

    Francine had no idea how much trouble purchasing a gargoyle statute for her flower garden could cause. After all, it was only a statute. Only her statute came to life after dark and moved in, kind of like a stray cat that was once fed and now never goes away. Rassmussen is Francine's polar opposite, but it doesn't keep the roommates from learning to live with one another. Perhaps one day, they may even learn to love. Expect an update on Wednesdays and Saturdays. Want to stay updated with CaseysPen? Follow CaseysPen1 on Instagram or CaseysPen#8300 on Discord. Illustrated by @abido_odles on Instagram

    24 Chs 7 Sammlungen