one_time_gamer

Hello, I read all of your chapters up to now, I think it's time for me to give a review of my own.First writing quality: Your writing quality is good, There are some grammar mistakes but I know that it will improve as time goes on. Story development: The story is going on in smooth motion there is no need to rush at the story Take your time and then write.Character design: Author you did not explain all the character backgrounds but I think I know that you are doing this to build some excitement but please tell us already their background. As for Evelyn, I hope there is something spicy for us waiting. Updating stability: You update daily and that is a good thing that's all I can say.World background: I can say anything about world background because I did not see it much for myself but I will give another review after I explore more of this novel.Overall it's a good novel You should try it if anyone sees my review.