Stevo_Ballou

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2022-02-01 Beigetreten Global
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Stevo_Ballou
Stevo_Ballou
Stevo_Ballou
3 months ago
Commented

This constant thing of content below is repeated to fulfill a task is honestly annoying as hell. I pay coins to be able to read new content. I am not waiting for the content below is repeated. kind of a let down yo

Stevo_Ballou
Stevo_Ballou
6 months ago
Commented

why have u stalled, so waiting for more chapters

Stevo_Ballou
Stevo_Ballou
9 months ago
Commented

ur nit gonna wrap up his personal stuff, like his daughter, the piggy princess, earth. kinda sad to be honest. very good book but distasteful n a let down ending

Stevo_Ballou
Stevo_Ballou
1 years ago
Commented

why oh why do u have to explain things over n over, get on with the story

Stevo_Ballou
Stevo_Ballou
1 years ago
Posted

Dear Writer This can go places. Great start so far. I am a big reader. It's probably what I do most really and if I can get a job reading I probably would lol. I like the flow of the story and where it can go. This one has potential and I hope u keep going and endure through all the time and struggles. I ll be reading every step of the way. If I can read this and be able to see it like a movie in my head it's pretty damn good.

Stevo_Ballou
Stevo_Ballou
1 years ago
Commented

still so much over explaining and going over things over and over, focus more on the story to, yes details are important but not when they are explained continually n takes whole chapters just for that. I want the story, what comes next. try to tone it down and mix the details in with the pace of the story. try not to repeat to much. this could ve of easily been near the top of my favorites. I read alot..... alot lol. sometimes several books at once n some. stop the repetition so much n this would be epic mYbe more epic then others I have read. Bout to give up on reading this cause of the waste of chapters, my time n money.

Stevo_Ballou
Stevo_Ballou
1 years ago
Commented

again going over the same details that were already explained previously, a whole chapter wasted. my money going down the drain for this book

Stevo_Ballou
Stevo_Ballou
1 years ago
Commented

A lil to much details explained over and over, sometimes wanna be like just continue the story, whole chapters explaining the same thing over n over is not that great. Otherwise love the story

Stevo_Ballou
Stevo_Ballou
1 years ago
Commented

this is kinda sad, like a slap to face for the reader ands fans of this novel, so much potential. Really a good read but destroyed by the ending. To sad