The arena
"Arena requires you to register, give details of both warriors, set a date, and all that."
Supreme Harem God System
Fantasy · SleepDeprivedSloth
compensate me somehow
don't you think you should compensate somehow?"
Supreme Harem God System
Fantasy · SleepDeprivedSloth
"compensate me somehow?"
Then suddenly, the man smiled, "Now that I have to wait because of you, don't you think you should compensate somehow?" The man spoke as he glanced at Riona.
Supreme Harem God System
Fantasy · SleepDeprivedSloth
"eyed him" I'm assuming. So I guess I was wrong in my comment and I did find an incorrect pronoun.
Then suddenly, Riona stepped forward, holding Nux's arm in a way that it rested on her cleavage, making sure to claim her husband before any vixen eyed her.
Supreme Harem God System
Fantasy · SleepDeprivedSloth
Overall it flows better but I'll need to see some more chapters with it. In the past one of the big issues I've noticed was improper pronouns but I didn't see that here. I did notice that in the first half there was a lack of contractions when people were talking, but in the second half of the chapter it had the contractions. Not sure if that is the editor and you though. Felt a bit odd not having the contractions for the first part of the chapter but I probably wouldn't have paid it much attention if you hadn't asked about the AI editor quality.
Do you want a threesome between Aisha, Eisheth, and Nux?
Supreme Harem God System
Fantasy · SleepDeprivedSloth
We don't actually know what happened, only what the girls assume happened. Also they never consummated their relationship so no, even if worse comes to worst, Nux still wouldn't have a green hat.
Skyla commented. She still remembered how Nux claimed to make her hers in front of everyone.
Supreme Harem God System
Fantasy · SleepDeprivedSloth
I feel like Derek's plan is to basically use this tower like a Death Star. have it gather the energy, take the final quest, then shoot all that energy through a portal, destroying the Shattered World and killing all the demons there.
What are you guys on about, there is no missing day or else the Win-Win would have been broken or show the LOA thing. A few days ago he posted 2 chapters before reset and 2 right after reset.
Feeling bad for Arthur is waaaaay down the list compared to being disgusted with his White Knight attitude. So much naivety just becomes sickening.
The Damned Demon
Fantasy · Resurgent