Amai is Japanese for Sweet, Dolce is Italian for Sweet as well. I am neither Japanese nor Italian. I just like sweets a lot.
I've been enjoying your inputs and corrections, but I don't intend to remove them because I think they're funny. But thanks either way.
I am malding so bad rn I can't focus.
idk what to do with that number lol. I just write stuff
So far, the themes being used are pretty standard for it's genre. While they are reused, I can tell the author's respect for the theme in his writing. That said, themes are ingredients and you can make different foods with the same ingredients. The only thing that will make it stand out is how he's going to cook it. So far, I can tell that it's palatable to enjoy reading. The story does seem very intriguing so far in the early chapters.
Thank you! I didn't notice I can send thanks for this.
Sorry about the delay. There has been a deliberation between Amai(me) and Nai(also me) about how we should progress the story and whether or not we should stop holding back on the disgusting parts. I'll try to be faster next time and not delay the updates further. Sorry about that.
It's annoying, really. But when this got contracted, I have a lot of restrictions. I'm just waiting for my CE to give me solutions to the problem.
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original We Will Be Magic Knights!
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The story about a man wanting to become the best Magic Knight, but will face the most odd obstacle of his life. He gained a second body! What's more, it's a girl! But the real obstacles are the things happening behind his back! Will he ever figure out what they are before it's too late?246 Chs 1.3k Sammlungen
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Sliver of Silver
In a world where the glory of humanity had fallen, Humans survived by living in floating cradles of life in the skies created by their last living Goddess. But with limited resources, humanity was bound to put their feet back on the ground to survive. With the ever floating cradles called Eden Towers, humanity survives by getting towed by fate itself and hoping to find land with resources they can harvest even temporarily. And with the land crawling with mutated beasts, hostile non-living creatures, and even titans, only the brave Guardians with their God given powers could secure resources for the citizens of the Eden Towers. But, there's also a group capable of securing resources for the citizens for the lower caste. These people are called Collectors. People who are brave enough to put their feet back on the ground, but did not receive the gift to protect themselves from the creatures of their world. The story revolves around a young man named "Rusty". With his partner "Ruby", he puts his feet on the ground in hopes to go up the caste and have a better future. Although he does another jump to the ground like usual, something out of the ordinary happens.2 Chs 1 Sammlungen
We got to the point where the story got altered by accident because of a characters appearance. We(I) tried to plan how to progress the story to make writing easier, but because of this one character, those plans got thrown out the window and now we're freeballing it. Until we stabilize the flow, the story will feel a bit random for a while as it progresses.
We Will Be Magic Knights!
Fantasy · Amai_Dolce