I thought that it was a good chapter. I really didn't see anything wrong with it although I hoped at first that he did at least kiss Mylene but even if he didn't it was still great.
Hope everything is ok and you continue this story. A great start so far.
Fantastic writing so far. Good dialogue and decent fight scenes although the joust part was great. Strong willed MC working towards his goals already. Not a ton to go off yet but everything has been very good so far. Thanks for the chapters and keep up the great work.
Sounds great to have a plan to tackle your writing but please take care of yourself to not have burnout. It had a unique start, even with minimum screen time both the mother and first caretaker made a huge impact on myself and the mc with how much character they showed in little time. To the point I already cared what happened to them and hope the mother is still alive. Your work had massive potential and I eagerly await for the chapters to be released. So please take care of yourself.
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Nice to see you back and writing again. You're a great writer that makes interesting characters with a knack for small details that builds upon the world. It's only been 3 chapters but we get a feel of the characters that have been introduced sans Rangiku but shes had minimal screen time and internal thoughts. As long as you continue I know you'll make a great story.
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Great to see you back. Love the chapter and the whole story. Very well done
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Great depth in the back story of the old world and the MC. Really got the feel of the MC, his drive, desires and passion towards science. Don't have much to go on the new world, how characters develop, interact and how the MC feels about and deals with people. Overall great start with fantastic writing and a great eye for detail.
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TFTC. Good of Nagi to talk to Takashi like he did. Have a great time with your family
I think you've done a fine job with the MC. He's not heartless where he doesn't care about people, but he knows that the more they add to the group the harder it is to protect it. Let alone that the only ones he actually knows are in the group and their safety comes first. Decent fight scenes, smart/strong mc not op though, good characters and interactions. I'd like to get more insight on other characters but it's early so that's fine so far. So thank you for the chapters and keep up the great work.
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