Shanks is not a swordsman, hahahaha, the only individual in the world capable of rivaling Mihawk himself in fencing, even though he is inferior, is not a swordsman, so that's fine.
I wish everyone who stays a good fanfic I give up here, Sayajin lineage is my limit, I can't stand any fanfic with sharigan and Sayajin lineage, wow and the worst is that it seems like it's from a very reasonable fan, because if you didn't you would know that there is absolutely nothing that makes Sayajins innately strong
Konan doesn't have kekkei genkai, more precisely the technique she uses isn't really that special, it's not even Hiden, as for whether it's possible to do what she does, Tobirama did almost the same as Edo Tensei, but with bomb paper.
Dieses Buch wurde gelöscht.
If you want spells for your protagonist for the next battle, try seeing Nagi Springfield's spells from UQ Holder/Negima
I love tensura
If you want the MC to have a devil fruit, I strongly recommend the Gasha Gasha no Mi, it is the best fruit for an engineer/scientist but it is not an initial instance op.
Jolly Roger marco?
Take it easy, your story is really cool, I think it might be better if you just go with your idea because the public doesn't always help, webnovel fanfics are almost all the same, I don't know which one is valid for others, but yours is at least original in that sense.
This rating is based on potential and my personal tastes, if this story continues at the same level it has the potential to be the top 3 One Piece fanfic on the platform at the time it was made.
Shanks is not a swordsman, hahahaha, the only individual in the world capable of rivaling Mihawk himself in fencing, even though he is inferior, is not a swordsman, so that's fine.
Phantom Blade Zephyr: One Piece
Anime & Comics · TestSubject5