I really like how the author writes these chapters and I see very much potential in this Story depending on how the author continues. Personally I did only watch the first Pirate of the Caribbean movie so I can’t say if it is all movie accurate but I found it entertaining anyways.Hope you continue your good work author-san!
Author-san I believe it is fine this way.
Author-san I do think C) is the best option because there you will have more time for development of relationships which I think is more important than more chicks in the Harem. I think you would have just so much more freedom to write when you choose c) since you’re not focused to get all chicks in love with MC but you would have time for your own elements to add to the story like you did with FGO. I do think that a small harem would be acceptable since it will be manageable to write for you and the relationships will be just that much better than those stupid story’s where the relationships are all over the place and nothing makes sense anymore because there are like then billion love interests.So i belive c) is the best choice for you author-san.
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Date a Live: Inverse Spirit of Paradox
Anime & Comics · Wryyyyyyyy
The author has such a big brain it hurts my brain to even think about it.
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I was surprised that you did come back to this FF after that long break but I do agree that you did have a progress in Writing Quality and if you want to redo your chapters I do find it acceptable and hope that you will keep your word and post Chapters after your done with your redo. I will be looking forward to your return! I hope I will hear from you soon.
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One Piece: Path to Power
Anime & Comics · Paradox_
Thank you Author-san for the chapter, Although i do have one question, is there any reason for the Cover of the Story to be Pains Tendou Path or is there no reason for this decision?
The Beginning of the Story is very interesting. I think the Story has great potential and hope the Author will use this Potential. I think the Theme of the Story is a great idea of which i did not see any other Storys with a similar Plot. Although the author did not yet post many Chapters i do hope he will continue his good Job at writing new Chapters to continue the Story.
That line at the end though
Thanks for the chapter author-san.
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It´s unlikely the author would remove an ability like that, since he only implied that the energy is more potent than the stuff usualy used, and we know the demon lords, especialy Milim are not usual.
"Passed out after you..... named us." Evie explained noticing his confusion, she was fairly surprised that he could actually even wake up this fast after naming an Archdragon and giving away enough magicules to make it evolve to a Dragon King. What she didn't know was that he had the Dragon's Heart, a literal generator of refined magical energy far more potent than what this world was usually used to.
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Anime & Comics · Pure_R18_Terror