Honoured_Disciple

Honoured_Disciple

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2021-10-24 Beigetreten Global
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Honoured_Disciple
Honoured_Disciple
10 months ago
Posted

Readers do give some reviews, it helps a lot 🤗🤗

Honoured_Disciple
Honoured_Disciple
10 months ago
Posted

Author, I feel your story is abit rushed. Also if you don't put proper quotation marks it only gets confusing for us to differentiate between dialogue and statement. Since the mc is overpowered there is little room for development if not the mc hides his power. Short chapters don't matter to me since I am myself an author and I am currently writing a Gojo fanfiction and it has pretty short chapters.

Honoured_Disciple
Honoured_Disciple
10 months ago
Replied to DUGBERT

Only Gojo knows that and this is not Japan

It was only Grisella who called him Gojo. Sometimes she asked him why he called himself that to which he couldn't answer.

Reincarnation of the Honoured One (Gojo Satoru)

Reincarnation of the Honoured One (Gojo Satoru)

Fantasy · Honoured_Disciple

Honoured_Disciple
Honoured_Disciple
11 months ago
Replied to TakeEasy

Well there will be some romance between side characters not the main characters.

Honoured_Disciple
Honoured_Disciple
11 months ago
Commented

Obviously Gojo is the Honoured One. Why would he care about Makima.

"I don't think about her." He spoke with a chuckle, as Denji and Aki couldn't help but let out surprised expressions. Meanwhile, Power and Himeno smiled and began seeing him in a new light, with way more respect. After all, it wasn't easy for a guy to resist the charms of someone like Makima, at least in their opinion.

Reborn as Gojo Satoru in Chainsaw Man

Reborn as Gojo Satoru in Chainsaw Man

Anime & Comics · David_555

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