its becoming boring
i was honestly enjoying this story but stopped at chapter 167. Its becoming a complete trash. If you want to make him overpowered so early, why don't you directly give him all the elements from the beginning. You gave him even the darkness and that too darkness l, which was Lira's. MC's is like a spoiled baby always crying betrayal, but when it was his own turn, he too betrayed lira when she was so good too him.
maybe you should try original scripts instead of just stealing others's work.
I don't understand one thing. Why sabotage marvel and DC when you have such a successful franchise and universe yourself. What's more marvel and dc will only start in late 2000s. Even if its fiction, Marvel and Dc are more than just a fiction, they are emotion. By the time they would've released, Kazir could already have much more success and maybe the fiction would end before that timeline.
I think there's no need to dirty kazir's mother that much. she was also a victim of the past, and as you explained earlier, she seems to be a mental patient. I am not saying to completely whitewash her, but wouldn't it be okay to just treat her or send her to mental hospital instead of dirtying. This can also play a good role in healing Kazir's phobia
there is a suggestion, Can't you make story go fast paced and make director end up with Scarlet, or even Angelina is good
please make mc end up with Angelina Jolie. I love her so much.
I changed the age, you can check now.
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[Hollywood] Female Superstar
Celebrities · Novel_Surge
okay. Anyway, I was just thinking. Twilight will not be included.
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[Hollywood] Female Superstar
Celebrities · Novel_Surge
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original [Hollywood] Female Superstar
Sarah opened her eyes and found that she had traveled back to the past. She was once a genius admired striving for her dreams, but in the end lost herself to the darkness and Vanity of Hollywood. Will this time she correct her mistakes or follow the same path of destruction? ....... This is an experimental book written by me. But before you read it, kindly turn off your moral compass.19 Chs 170 Sammlungen
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Rise of Hollywood Superstar
A journey of girl seizing all possible opportunities and her road of becoming a Superstar. . Amelia was a simple theater actor but after experiencing a life changing event, she walked on the path to reach the top. Chapters at the beginning are a bit short. i am revising them and the length of the later chapters is also increased. if you want, then you can start reading after twenty chapters.63 Chs 114 Sammlungen
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[Hollywood] Superstar
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Legendary Producer in Hollywood
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Hollywood Peak
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Rise of Swain (Marvel x DC)
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Hollywood: Journey of a Superstar
People say that one needs to have talent to succeed, but it's only half truth. Because in Hollywood, talent comes after luck and appearence. The same is the story of Amelia. She had the talent, but not enough appearence to able to show it. In the end, she was forced the fact and live her life as a theater actor. Due to an accident, she was reborn in the past with a new identity and appearence. This time, she has both the talent and beautiful appearence. But the question remains, will Amelia be able to overcome the last hurdle of luck and succeed in this industry filled with darkness and flith, or will it be her existence that will be devoured? Let's see the exciting journey of Amelia filled with Love, hatred, succes, loss and obsession in Hollywood. Note: This novel is the revised form of my other novel.0 Chs 22 Sammlungen
how long does he hide his powers
Awakening of the Sorcerer King
Fantasy · Madarm