There will never be a huge emphasis on the assistant. It is only introduced so that Akuma can express his thoughts through dialogue with someone. Likewise, she will never receive a body or any physical manifestation. She can be considered an AI. Thank you for your interest in this story.
Let's begin. The claims about "God," (even though the story says that the main character is communicating with the Devil) and the system I do not understand. This is the standard beginning of many works. If you don't like the "system" tag, that's your preference. About the size of the chapters, I can agree. I write between 800 and 1800 words per chapter. I don't understand about the missing parts either. All chapters go in order. I will not say anything about the plot. Everyone has their own preferences. But thanks for the review anyway.
There is such a possibility, but I want the protagonist to have a more memorable weapon. (The prototype would be the two Death Scythes from the Darksiders series.) Thank you for your feedback.
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This will be a dark tale of the journey of a man whose core values are a lust for wealth and power, and where will these actions lead him? To the top of the world, or will he die on the way to his goal? This is my second fanfic, the first fanfic is a villain in the world of naruto.(https://www.webnovel.com/book/villain-in-the-world-of-naruto_26099823005028205) The two stories are not related in any way, it's just that I wanted to write a story in the pokemon world as well. I hope you enjoy it. I don't own the Pokémon. They are a product of Nintendo16 Chs 440 Sammlungen
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Akuma, standing under the red light of the moon that mimicked the pattern of his eyes, stared at the destruction of the world. Cries, cries of despair, pleas for mercy were heard, but he only smirked and said: "Devil, it's your time!"39 Chs 230 Sammlungen
Thanks for the review. I'll take your advice and work on finalizing the story after I finish the Konoha arc.
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