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I don't really like these fanfics that focus on Luffy's crew, it seems like the protagonist wants to follow in Luffy's footsteps without creating his own path. Robin makes sense, but the others not so much.

It's strange that he hasn't learned it already, observation and conquering should be innate to him, since he has such a good understanding. As for the armament, he must acquire when he has the physical level of a rear admiral.

no problem

It's Jangmo-o's family, not Axew's family.

blue/indigo, green/blue I don't know if it was the translator or the author who made a mistake, but most Pokémon with blue potential actually have indigo potential. I don't even remember him having any pokemon with green potential on his team, the ones he had had already evolved their potential.

the author does not stop forcing situations.

Rasengan is an A-rank jutsu, if I'm not mistaken, it and the Odama Rasengan, which is also A-rank, are the jutsus with the greatest attack power that Minato has, this in itself shows the rarity of these jutsus. An S rank jutsu is the Rasenshuriken, if the user manages to throw it, in the current era of the novel there are no more than 15 ninjas who can survive.

one S rank ninjutsu is already reasonable, one S rank Fuinjutsu is generous, five is madness. I'm not even going to talk about the ability to invent them, it's insane, I like overpower proganists, but that's going overboard. PS: as for rewriting the chapters, in half an hour you can edit them to make them less revolting. PS²: if you have time and interest, it would be good for you to deepen your knowledge about the chakra system and common capabilities, you must have thought of the Hyuga to think that domain expansion was feasible, but the hyuga have a special constitution.

I'll continue following because you have some interesting ideas, although poorly developed, but I advise you to rewrite the last 3 chapters. 5 class S Fuinjutsus are worth all the basic and average knowledge about Fuinjutsu that the Uzumaki clan has (this is the clan's guarantee of wealth), you are greatly underestimating this level.

what a boring chapter, this shounen anime character behavior in a character who was an adult police officer and should know how to maintain his composure, bothers me a lot.

B is fine, but when I say that it is an alternative, C makes more sense. The Uzumakis already have an island of their own, and there must already be something similar to a ninja village, so they wouldn't join any other village, not to mention that they already have the power of one on their own. Therefore, it is better for the Hima clan to found a village on its own, calling some clans that are not from the important villages, such as the Chinoike clan, the Jugo clan, Rinha clam (story from a Naruto game) and other clans that you can develop a story. Some examples for fan-developed clans would be clans for Dark Release, Metal Release and Crystal Release. The country of rice fields would be the best place to make a village, while the country of tea would also be a good place, especially if one of the available jobs in the village is forging weapons, it would be good to negotiate with Suna and Kiri, who do not have easy assistance to the steel country.

I remember it not being flawless, but it was better than this one.

I'll stop here, good luck to the author and whoever continues reading.

I believe it will be well explained, since the author wanted this to be the plot, there is an indication about time travel or sealing. It's bad that it already starts with a forced plot, apparently, but I hope it's a very good explanation.

chronologically, yes, the uchihas and shisui are alive.

The story has been showing signs of being forced for a while now, but it seems like readers aren't noticing. So many different factors and some details still following the same path as the original plot, this is unrealistic and the biggest example of this was Derek and Scott's conversation being practically the same words even with the MC and Stiles being on their side. Kate's part makes sense, but him taking this attitude towards Alisson goes beyond teenage recklessness and stupidity, it is something that destroys the very construction of the character.

I no longer like Ned Stark, but when the fanfic makes Cat cross the line and Ned just gets angry and doesn't take action, it makes me think the character is an hypocrite. He should have left Jon with the Reed house, he would have been much happier and in less danger of being discovered.

firstly, it is unrealistic for his father to decide to make a film with this theme and these scenes, secondly, it is a crime. You can already see the author's initial inequality, writing what he wants, disregarding readers and basic logic. I'm going to read a few more chapters to see how it goes, but I'm already out of it.

If he didn't report it I would quit on the spot.

I have to say that this battle was a total disappointment, pointless and illogical. Two ninjas standing idly by while a third dies, what logic is there in that?