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“The only impossible journey is the one you never begin.” — Tony Robbins

2021-08-30 Beigetreten United Kingdom
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Thank you for the chapter, R.S!

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I peeked through my eyes = I peeked through my eyelids ? I’m not sure for this one

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Noice = noise

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4 hours ago
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I bet this is your self input for the first sentence.

I just sit there staring into space, I can't find the motivation to anything. Well what can I do? I've already searched everywhere for an exit but there isn't any, and it's not like I can jump 20 meters to get back through the hole I fell from.

Reborn as a fox in a game like world

Reborn as a fox in a game like world

Games · Reece_Smith_9208

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6 hours ago
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Interesting start! Couple mistakes but nothing major! I see potential! I hope to read more like it!

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Nevermind. Ignore my last comment

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Were these all the species he could’ve been or is?

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I will = I will be Anthing = Anything

said,"I think my time is over." His last words was," I hope in my next life, i will born anthing other than how i am now."

Reincarnated as a Demon in Another World

Reincarnated as a Demon in Another World

Fantasy · RyuAmaterasu

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7 hours ago
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Thank you for reading! Thoughts?

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