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I love that you spoke about retinitis pigmentosa. Not very many are familiar with it. My brother in law and husband both have it. This chapter makes it fun and personal!

He still has the elf princess’s soul to barter with!

Blood Elf Monarch! Interweaving the books and concepts. Nicely done!

I hope your still writing this story!

Hope all is well. Would enjoy reading more of the book.

Thanks for the double chapters

"If a book is well written, I always find it too short." Jane Austen-

His daughter has come! One chapter doesn’t feel like enough. Great job on the continual growth within the plot! This should be a movie series. Just saying… I’d want to be one of the actresses in it 🤣