I find the constant story space filling flashbacks pretty annoying..
I like it! I now know what caused Rise to stall out lol
See this! I just gifted the story: Magic castle
Also after that sentence it was a period and then the word he was not capitalized to start the new sentence. Anyway I can help I'm happy to. Too bad I'm not your proofreader LOL then I could get the story earlier than I do and additive for you but I wouldn't know how to accomplish all that. I do everything on my phone and I think making edits correcting the story for you would not be practical.
Before this, he hadn't thought just two words would make him react like this...
Strongest Mage with the Lust system
Fantasy · Blizzard54k
stoking**
Before this, he hadn't thought just two words would make him react like this...
Strongest Mage with the Lust system
Fantasy · Blizzard54k
Blizzard54k thank you so much for all the continued releases of both novels. I believe I am speaking for all of us fans when I say please don't stop creating ❣️
Thank you for the continued chapters. I will not always be able to do the gifts but I will when I can.
See this! I just gifted the story: Magic castle
Thank you for the continued releases. I truly enjoy your creations and understand how hard it must be to continue to craft these gems.
and on another side note stop starting each chapter with two paragraphs from the last chapter or more it's unneeded people can go back and read if they don't understand but this thought that soon I'll be paying for the chapters and with the flashbacks and the rehashes you going to lose me and a lot of readers short chapters are not worth paying for.
Supreme Harem Servant System
Fantasy · Niiyeng