How stupid is he? He wants to revive the ten-tail but makes himself the three-tail jinchuriki. For him to achieve his goal, he basically has to kill himself. Why even become a jinchuriki when he already has more power than a tailed beast?
He draws his blade against a magnet release user. Ladies and Gentlemen, please applaud our Protagonist.
Bro is so weak he can't even take out an average male adult but is already dreaming about immortality.
Saving them sounds noble and all but it would reduce his food by 2/3 and would ultimately be foolish.
I'm only giving 1 star because that's the minimum I can give. I can understand and respect it if people like this book because they either have no idea what a good book is or because they simply feel like reading something stupid. I always look for good and serious stories and this isn't even coming near that list. Just the first two chapters had more cliche than most other books out there combined and I can honestly say I have never read such a cliche book before. The author also always responds to negative comments and critic with aggression, not even bothering to check if what he's saying is even correct. My first advise to the Author is; ignore those comments all together before you say something stupid and get even more fire. I don't know if this book is meant to be a joke or if the author genuinely thinks it's good, but in the former case, I would advise you to write in your synopsis that it is a joke story and not a serious one, this would massively reduce the critic as we reader can mentally prepare our self for the disgusting cliche in the first few chapters.
This is just sad to look at. Not only can you not take critic and always respond aggressively, you can't even get your facts straight. Telling the guy who wrote four HP fanfics that he didn't write anything when you can clearly see otherwise just two clicks away.
I don't know how he managed it but this was somehow even more disgustingly cliche, which I didn't think was possible.
I'm about to puke. This was more cliche than if the real protagonist were to get isekai'd. How are ROB's who have lived for potentially billions of years so easy? Just a few halfhearted compliments and the ROB doesn't even bother to read his mind and simply grants him three OP wishes that were in reality way more than three.
In theory, nothing. Although their lightning based powers look similar, they are completely different concepts. If it does, by that logic anyone with lightning powers would have access or a connection to the speed force. But who knows what the Author will cook up.
What kind of man slut is he? He fucks 12 year old girls and married women with kids alike. I have seen protagonists get together with mikoto before but never like this. They would either make sure sasuke and itachi never exist or that they are his children but never have I seen one become their step father.
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