She still hasn't assimilated the Yellow Lantern Ring? Why? In the end it's just a external power, just make it her own.
I'm surprised her bounty didn't specify only alive. Knowing the World Nobles, they would undoubtedly order the Marines to capture her alive for them to enjoy.
How about you start telling us in what world the scenarios are taking place?
Isn't the the first time he learned what his race was? Why isn't he reacting or did he already learn about it on Karate Island?
It won't be great but it will be an ending. How many authors can say that on this platform?
Also, I'm probably going to do a big timeskip soon to the 31st century where the final few chapters of this book will take place. I think it's not hard to see that I'm running out of ideas and motivation for this book, at least it's at the end anyway, so there won't be a dropping.
Beyond Reality: Throne of Nothingness
Anime & Comics · LostWizard
Assuming the dark thing on the humans arm was haki, this is a mistake. Haki doesn't have any color, the animators only made it look like it for the viewers.
Because it doesn't go well with his character, unlike this book, the new one will be a lot better and make a clear picture of the MC's personality. His personality is also a major factor in the book. Won't be like Zerr'on and rape and kill but he won't play a hero and help others if it doesn't benefit him or kill, thought he is going to kill an unborn child at some point but most wouldn't see it as evil as the baby isn't human or humanoid for that matter.
More!!! Don't tell me you gave up on writing after just releasing 4 chapters.
I will write another book once I'm finished with this one but the MC will be neutral at best.
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original Beyond Reality: Throne of Nothingness
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The story of a guy that got separated from reality and is now ‘existing’ in the Nothingness outside any Universe and Multiverse. He occasionally ends up in different Universes and uses these chances to have fun and grow in power. I don´t own anything except my own characters and worlds Tags: Rape, Torture, BDSM, Absolute Evil MC, Pregnancy This is my first book and English isn´t my native language.248 Chs 3.4k Sammlungen
Why is he planning to attack at night? I thought he didn't like fighting in the dark.
One Piece: Chaos Kong
Anime & Comics · Ozonelayer