Abzeichen 3
Moments 13
I thank you for having listened to my advice after all it is your story and I have no right to tell you anything about it but I appreciate that you considered it
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don't worry your story is going pretty well leaving aside the fact I already mentioned and I hope you continue to make the story as you prefer to make it
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I like the story but you focus too much on writing about the characters it takes a template from which makes it just a bit of story and the rest just information from a template character
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my condolences for your sister take all the time you want
ch 11 Bad news.
transmigrated as son goten
Anime & Comics · amarril14
Good
ch 60 Chapter 51:New changes
Evolution of World:Super Harem
Anime & Comics · Kuro_Simp
I would like you to continue
ch 0 3 Quirk Awakening / System Online
Reincarnated in MHA as Qin Shi Huang
Anime & Comics · Javier_Dejesus
I excited for another chapter
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MARVEL: GAME MAKER SYSTEM
Movies · NunuXD
I really would like you to continue writing this story but if you find it uncomfortable to continue I would recommend that you do another one and then when you are more confident and have more experience you rewrite this story (like all my comments, use a translator)