-Before it could be misinterpreted, I was talking about Kakashi's speech when he said Obito's line. I was going to post it at that paragraph but chose not to and forgot to change the start since it doesn't make sense out of context.
Don't listen to him. Naruto, it's a trap! his dad chose the same yet was treated like a traitor; you are a ninja. Ninjas are supposed to be a tool, a weapon that will die for the master. You can only rely on your own abilities, not the power of friendship, since you have the potential to solo the world (Kaguya). Once you start killing gods in Dark Souls, the rest is dead weight. They will demand you die for them because you are their ultimate weapon. You won't have freedom if you stay as a ninja. NOTE: It would have been funny to see Naruto saying, Okay, I don't want to be a ninja either, and refuse to be one even after Kakashi says he passed. It would be funny, but it would also show him he doesn't have a choice when the Hokage says, You need to be a ninja. It would be a reality check to show he is seen as a tool with no freedom (sure, some may see him as Naruto, like Hiruzen, but in the end, Hiruzen is the Hokage, and it's his duty to make sure Naruto is brainwashed or forms attachments with subtle manipulation).
So what you're saying is he needs to die(shinobi world) to become an undead so he can have an epic power-up and scare moment.(since I assume he needs to be undead to show his stats at full power as chosen, though this is my own theory, so we will see how wrong I was.)
Isn't he undead? How can he drown when he doesn't need to breathe? and since he was fighting to kill, why didn't his killer intent show? It would have been good to see Kakashi's reaction.
He is a noble now. Can't he enslave them and order them to kill each other to farm exp? What is the INT stat and gamer mind doing?
If I'm being honest, I didn't understand the logic about the second chapter, like how he automated his powers. Like, why does he even need to watch over humans? Does it make him stronger? Then again, I'm tired; maybe I will get it after I wake up, but I did understand he is a god gone rogue/mad (can a god even go mad since for them whatever they do is normal and insanity is a human concept), and he is trolling the world, and I LOVE it—the troll god. It's not cringe troll either; it was fun to read, especially Madara It's like Chaos God decided to prank mortals, but the pranks are only funny to God and deadly to humans, but why would God care? He can break and fix the toys if he needs to.
Meridians ? its tenketsu you should put the raw link if this is chinese.
It was completely different from what Yasu had felt before. He also sensed that his meridians and chakra pathways had grown stronger, likely due to the strengthening of his body.
Anime & Comics · fake_lion
Yuta did not know that frost wolves could roar and cover a large area with ice once they were strong enough, but he had already decided to include the pup in the ten shadows technique. Because, like the blue wing, this baby wolf looked very cute and Yuta thought he could use it to gather girls around him.
Anime & Comics · Isekai_Traveler
If I remember right, he has four different energies right now, right? It would be better if you combined them to like negative energy or corrosive/corrupt energy since he is a curse. His energy should have a debuff-like property, and it would be easier than saying he doesn't have enough chakra but still has soul power, and cursed energy and magic like that would be confusing.
This may sound bad. I don't want to see Naruto bonding with Konoha or Shinobi in general. There are a lot of fanfics that show the power of friendship, and being a prisoner of Konoha is no big deal. I know Naruto still didn't experience the true dark souls world or just started it, but I was expecting a little more selfish and uncaring one. By the way, will his flame eat the ashura's chakra? It would be an interesting plot point, like after it's gone, his real personality starts to develop without consent or meddling of Ashura.
Naruto: The Chosen Undead
Anime & Comics · Adamo_Amet