lith_Mein

lith_Mein

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2021-06-18 Beigetreten Spain
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lith_Mein
27 days ago
Commented

Interesting, but without the synopsis I don't know what to expect but from the label I know more or less what it will be about.

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lith_Mein
1 months ago
Replied to SKuLL

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Hair like rivers of midnight framed a face so ethereal it felt wrong to look at. Her pale skin shimmered faintly, not like flesh, but like frost kissed by moonlight.

The Reincarnated Villain Can Break the Fourth Wall!

The Reincarnated Villain Can Break the Fourth Wall!

Eastern · SKuLL

lith_Mein
lith_Mein
2 months ago
Replied to SKuLL

It feels the same as your other novels, the different thing would be this tragic beginning. This reminds me of the other novel that you changed authors for (I only read the first 6 chapters), but this one feels a little "rushed" so to speak, I understand that you don't focus on her old life, but with her new life, not seeing interactions with her new family, it's a little "oks, fine, you lost them, how sad", I didn't feel that connection, like for example, in Deviant I really liked the whole first arc of the family, it brought me closer to them, although I have mixed feelings about how you followed the story. From your novels what I like the most are interactions between characters, so I feel a little "empty" with this beginning. Although it could also be that you prefer to focus more on the revenge that will arise in the next chapters, in any case, I'm happy that you started a new novel, I look forward to the new chapters.

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lith_Mein
lith_Mein
3 months ago
Commented

I like your novels too much, thanks for the chapter.

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lith_Mein
4 months ago
Commented

Thanks for the chapter. By the way, I was taken aback by Xiao bluntness with Mei, and I wonder how he'll approach his daughters. I'm really intrigued by Xiao future plans.

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