Hardik_Yadav_4121

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Hardik_Yadav_4121
Hardik_Yadav_4121
8 months ago
Commented

For the first time it's pretty good author-san , keep it up .

[A/N: I'm planning to end the first arc in this series in the next chapter, maybe two. I'll call it 'New world-arc' as it was Yatora's start in the new world. Following the end of this arc, there will be two arcs, that are completely AU, until the Chunin exam starts, which will be the next arc from the series. This was my first time ever writing a real fighting scene with magic and stuff, so I'd appreciate a little feedback to how it was and what I can improve on]

Naruto: Stormninja

Naruto: Stormninja

Anime & Comics · AkaneMint

Hardik_Yadav_4121
Hardik_Yadav_4121
8 months ago
Replied to ptbv

probably all seized because of his father found guilty

As it turns out, Ronan's father is a death eater, currently in Azkaban. This came as a big surprise for him because this meant that he would have to work a lot harder than before to get into the good books of the good guys. This also meant that he wouldn't have to work too hard to blend in his own house, which was a good thing as well.

HP: Ronan's Journey

HP: Ronan's Journey

Book&Literature · YashVardhan_OG

Hardik_Yadav_4121
Hardik_Yadav_4121
10 months ago
Commented

no

Hardik_Yadav_4121
Hardik_Yadav_4121
11 months ago
Replied to 2323w

this scene , can you tell me where it is from?

The book he was reading had a pretty advanced title called "The Way of the Conqueror."

Court of Rebirth: The Conqueror (KnB)

Court of Rebirth: The Conqueror (KnB)

Anime & Comics · mythoast

Hardik_Yadav_4121
Hardik_Yadav_4121
1 years ago
Replied to Vedora_Tempest

Author San I have a idea too I mean you have to twick a little here and there give him wood release. I mean Naruto already has a hand made up of first hokage's cell hand how much of a stretch will it be. but I liked it so far keep up. let's see what you choose here as there are many directions this story can turn to.

2. **Void Sight Eye (Kyometsugan)**: The Kyometsugan allows Nagato to manipulate the concept of space and distance. He can teleport instantly to any location he has seen or marked, making him incredibly elusive and agile in combat.

Boruto - Reborn as Boruto's twin brother.

Boruto - Reborn as Boruto's twin brother.

Anime & Comics · Vedora_Tempest

Hardik_Yadav_4121
Hardik_Yadav_4121
1 years ago
Replied to yoshikage_kira9

I liked it to be honest with you , there are so many options for him to grow his eyes into.

2. **Void Sight Eye (Kyometsugan)**: The Kyometsugan allows Nagato to manipulate the concept of space and distance. He can teleport instantly to any location he has seen or marked, making him incredibly elusive and agile in combat.

Boruto - Reborn as Boruto's twin brother.

Boruto - Reborn as Boruto's twin brother.

Anime & Comics · Vedora_Tempest

Hardik_Yadav_4121
Hardik_Yadav_4121
1 years ago
Replied to

see what can you do is, with his 360 degree sight he can dose anything with ftg. it's already broken as no hyuga have it as they don't prefer ninjutsu and with maturity you can give him more reaction time when he fight issihiki .Or provide him a sage mode or something these dojutsu makes no sense I mean what's the point having a alternative dimensions what he is going to keep there or if you want it so badly later in stage you can make him make a ninjutsu who does that not waste a dojutsu over it

2. **Void Sight Eye (Kyometsugan)**: The Kyometsugan allows Nagato to manipulate the concept of space and distance. He can teleport instantly to any location he has seen or marked, making him incredibly elusive and agile in combat.

Boruto - Reborn as Boruto's twin brother.

Boruto - Reborn as Boruto's twin brother.

Anime & Comics · Vedora_Tempest

Hardik_Yadav_4121
Hardik_Yadav_4121
1 years ago
Replied to Jordan_6286

correct my thoughts and I don't like any of those suggestions.

Hardik_Yadav_4121
Hardik_Yadav_4121
1 years ago
Replied to DIMIE_21

yes, I mean what's the point giving a dojutsu who does that

2. **Void Sight Eye (Kyometsugan)**: The Kyometsugan allows Nagato to manipulate the concept of space and distance. He can teleport instantly to any location he has seen or marked, making him incredibly elusive and agile in combat.

Boruto - Reborn as Boruto's twin brother.

Boruto - Reborn as Boruto's twin brother.

Anime & Comics · Vedora_Tempest

Hardik_Yadav_4121
Hardik_Yadav_4121
1 years ago
Commented

well he is coming now , I can see it happening 😂🤣

Having the capability to protect myself doesn't mean that I have the ability to defeat it easily. And even if I come across a situation where I have to fight it, I would rather choose to avoid it if possible, knowing that there is probably a 50/50 chance of me winning. Even if I do win, I will be left with several injuries, some of them probably critical. As such, I stealthily left the place to continue exploring other parts of the island.

Silver Moon: The Epic of a Traveller(One Piece Fan Fic)

Silver Moon: The Epic of a Traveller(One Piece Fan Fic)

Anime & Comics · Justforfun