Vipex_Puka

2 months ago

Commented

Nice Name. PS. it's also my name

Name: Luca

Avatar, In A Darker World

Anime & Comics · PcaNovels

Vipex_Puka

8 months ago

Commented

I really like the story so far, but you could Break the big paragraphs into more smaller ones, like maybe 5 or 6 lines, maybe a bit longer if it fehlst better to read, makes it smoother to read.

ch 17 Graduation

Naruto-The secret sage

Anime & Comics · loskro

Vipex_Puka

1 years ago

Posted

I really like what youve done with this world

So, I'm a Dragon, What of it?

Anime & Comics · Dr_Armstrong

Vipex_Puka

1 years ago

Posted

Its a shame that you re-write, but at the sme time Im excited

Harry Potter and the Tragic Path

Book&Literature · Niggross

Vipex_Puka

1 years ago

Posted

really nice ............................

Game of Thrones: Path of the Hungry Bear

Book&Literature · JManM

Vipex_Puka

1 years ago

Commented

Dieses Buch wurde gelöscht.

Vipex_Puka

1 years ago

Replied to General_Kenobi_0

A Chaos Demon from Warhammer

[Daemon]

Custom Made Eldritch Creature

Anime & Comics · HopOffMe

Vipex_Puka

1 years ago

Posted

I've seen a few mistakes here and there, but overall, this is my favourite work here on this site.Keep going!

I Got Transmigrated In Grand Theft Auto V As Michael De Santa

Video Games · Stressed_Librarian

Vipex_Puka

1 years ago

Replied to romeotango148

He chose right with a kid like you

Yeah... I did good.

I Got Transmigrated In Grand Theft Auto V As Michael De Santa

Video Games · Stressed_Librarian

Vipex_Puka

1 years ago

Replied to romeotango148

Bro, that's just disrespectfull.Why does your Dad not look for another woman, that's not as ugly and old as your mother huh?

Yeah... I did good.

I Got Transmigrated In Grand Theft Auto V As Michael De Santa

Video Games · Stressed_Librarian