TheLost_Wanderer

male LV 2

A lost one, trying to find salvation.

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TheLost_Wanderer
TheLost_Wanderer
2 months ago
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I thought he would suffer physically after waking up because of what the king said. But I guess it's a more complicated(?) thing. Maybe it makes him suffer when he uses the power? Then why did the king said that, Kael can just not use the power at all. Tftc.

TheLost_Wanderer
TheLost_Wanderer
3 months ago
Commented

It's finally starting :). This kingdom felt really weak actually. It seems like there are more continents to conquer for The Empire. Still, our king here had hopes for Kael's growths. Let's see what happens now. Tftc.

TheLost_Wanderer
TheLost_Wanderer
3 months ago
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Good writing, even with so little chapters to read these characters feel... alive. Yeah they are more alive, while dying, than most stories there. Even if it's just the starting of the novel and we didn't see much, I'm loving what I read.

"Whatever your choice, thank you for coming to this room and spending your last moments with me. Apparently, even someone like me needs someone to talk to, huh... I feel at peace."

The Path of Ruin

The Path of Ruin

Fantasy · WindskyW

TheLost_Wanderer
TheLost_Wanderer
3 months ago
Commented

Great chapter.

TheLost_Wanderer
TheLost_Wanderer
3 months ago
Commented

Nice writing, it seems like the beginning arc is coming to an end. Tftc.

TheLost_Wanderer
TheLost_Wanderer
3 months ago
Commented

Nothing about the flower or the creatures anymore, just last honest moments of two humans. A slave and a king... They both are dying, no need to worry about anything else and just laughing at their last moments.

A slave and a king, in the same room, both on their deathbed... they just laughed.

The Path of Ruin

The Path of Ruin

Fantasy · WindskyW

TheLost_Wanderer
TheLost_Wanderer
3 months ago
Commented

Tftc.

TheLost_Wanderer
TheLost_Wanderer
3 months ago
Commented

I said no more sleeping but he will just end up passing out at this point.

He had lost his mind. He no longer thought about what he was going to do once he got to the fifth floor. He was just... going up. As far up as he could go, that's all. If he was going to die, he was going to die by going as far as he could.

The Path of Ruin

The Path of Ruin

Fantasy · WindskyW

TheLost_Wanderer
TheLost_Wanderer
3 months ago
Commented

At least he's not falling into sleep after all this pain :/.

The creature tried to use the claw on Kael's right shoulder to knock him backwards. And... it did it like child's play once again. Kael's small body was thrown back almost three meters and dragged along the ground for about a meter. His scream became a wheezing cry, it was hard not to think of the pain as his whole body was literally on fire.

The Path of Ruin

The Path of Ruin

Fantasy · WindskyW

TheLost_Wanderer
TheLost_Wanderer
3 months ago
Commented

It seems like there will be no escape for those remain alive. Still Kael is trying to go upstairs, hoping for someone to save him. I don't think they can hold this place much longer if they don't have someone OP. There will be no escape route either as they are too high from ground. Maybe there could be a secret escape route in the king's room? Tftc.

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