Not Quite, But I can't spoil more then that sadly
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The First Reaper
Fantasy · Superanonymous
Not necessarily evolution but there will be ways to change the power and evolve Astral Energy itself that the MC will discover as it goes on
Hey man, thank you for the tips this is my first time writing and I appreciate the notes. I think I need to fix the synopsis to make what you can expect from the story clearer. I also appreciate the grammar notes and I will go back and rework those chapters to fix the grammar. I hope you have a good day.
Hmm, for merging stuff into his race, I was going to go in a bit of a different direction from that but he will do something sorta similar as merging things into himself once he gets further into the story. Although there will be more ritual shenanigans later on as well
Hahaha, i definitely won’t drop it unless the story is finished and I see no way to build upon the world through other characters. Although it may have rough moments since I’m new to writing
It seems to be common for new novels, I heard that they review them to make sure it's appropriate. It should be ok to vote for in a couple days or after my second chapter is up, if its not at that point then I will reach out to support. Thanks for enjoying it so far!
Likely more since this is a book that seems like it’ll be about the MC moving between hundreds of worlds
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Void Evolution System
Fantasy · Crocs_is_Dead
I’m assuming that if evolution works like other monster novels then he will probably regain the arm when he evolves
Next, he tried to test his regeneration. He went to cut his arm, only to realize that his arm was no longer there. His face turned grim.
Void Evolution System
Fantasy · Crocs_is_Dead
I’m gonna be sad if bret ever dies because I love his and Blake’s bromance
"Right away." Bret really wanted to kill this woman. He wanted to disable her limbs and unhinge her jaw before tossing her to the goblins. Blake was his brother in arms. They were best friends. He paused as he took a look at Blake on the bed and suddenly felt anger well up from inside him and kicked the woman on the floor before picking her up by her foot and dragging her out of the room.
RE: My Dragon Girlfriend In The Dragonic Apocalypse
Fantasy · invayne
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original The First Reaper
It all started from vengeance, a young prince who simply wanted to protect an already doomed family. He stumbled upon a power that he had no right to, unaware of the hidden machinations of a dead god. 01010100 01101000 01100101 00100000 01110101 01101110 01101001 01110110 01100101 01110010 01110011 01100101 00100000 01101001 01110011 00100000 01100100 01100101 01100001 01100100 01010100 01101000 01100101 00100000 01110000 01101100 01100001 01101110 01100101 01110100 00100000 01110111 01101001 01101100 01101100 00100000 01100110 01101111 01101100 01101100 01101111 01110111 ------------------------------------------------------------------------- What can you expect from this book: -One love interest who will be introduced later in the story -Kingdom building which will start out as a town and grow from there -Some darker elements at time which will have warnings when particularly graphic along with fade to black R18 scenes -Charon creates his own system of power for his race -A 'System', however the 'System' is not as important of a factor and will not be a source of Charon's strength -The characters will not live up to their namesake right away, but they will later on with some differences32 Chs 60 Sammlungen
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The Second Tower
A world destroyed, A people without hope with only the option to rise to the occasion and try to find something, anything, to save them from their cursed isolation in this forsaken tower. To escape, to be free again. (Currently rewriting the story and redoing certain aspects)1 Chs 2 Sammlungen
I am writing the outline right now and then once I am done I am going to go back to releasing. I just needed to write my plans down so I can reduce any possible plot holes before I got too far in. I will say that I plan on releasing two or three chapters at once when I come back
The First Reaper
Fantasy · Superanonymous