harsh critic: I was in love with this book but this part here just made me dossapointed dissatisfied and so repulsive that I am right on the edge of dropping this book trying to save the halfbreeds: I'll do the same, sharing treasures he found himself with others; I can understand, being respectful and in love with Cecily even if she's an arrogant brat and thinks about him as useless trash; it's the mate bond, but this here is total bs this girl from day one is arrogant on top of her head and treats him worst than Cecily she's the reason he has to go through this god forsaken dungeon just 2 chs ago he was ready to break her neck and steal Ferris from her and now he's compassionate to her such behaviour and charecter development dosent male the reader fall in love and feel a bond with the mc it makes him/her curse till his/her throat goes dry the thing about anything that's being forced is that there's a breaking point for it here u are forcing ryu to be a noble benevolent deity in a world full of cruel dishonest and untrustful people who'll revive himself back to life if u killed him just to make sure his friends don't kill u in return 🙄 . Hell even goddess is cruel and merciless. not to mention that every 1.5th girl he meets starts to fall head over heels for him. from a beast killer u hv literally turned him into a docile puppy who'll wag his tail on whoever gives him a bone. The world building naration and the lore of this book is so beautiful except this forced charecter not devlopment but stagmentation of the mc it feels like he has learnt nothing throughput his journey the whole 189 chs worth of ryu's charector devlopment has blown out of the charts...in the wrong direction.
"Nothing." Rosa hid her flustered face behind a scowl. This was not the time to develop feelings just because of some kind of a damsel in distress syndrome.
Realm Wars
Fantasy · MiuNovels
am leaving this bk this one ch was enough for me
also how does his family allow him to roam on the streets for hrs even after knowing he's blind what kind of senseless ppl are these the author is just forcefully trying to create sympathy for the mc
if he's blind how can he go to a normal school
bruh literally what kind of family is this he's telling that now after two yrs of he being blind
"I see, if you ever need me to drop you off to school with your sister, don't hesitate to tell me, okay? My office work is always later in the morning so I have time to spare."
Lucid Dream Server
Games · DaisukiDayoSenpai
he named it after a dying star and believed the world was born cause of it's death the thing is he was dying and he built it................
no worries arc 3 is also awesome u can take ur time am just glad ur are gonna continue I was just asking to understand if I had understood it the rt way ty ;)
so glad u are gonna continue writing I'll make sure to check out ur other books too ur writing is really awesome am sure it'll be a wonderful journey ;)
I hate how ppl are just giving up such a beautiful bk just coz it's hard for them to digest mc being a slave for the starting 50 chs it's just such a shame strong mc don't mean great stories strong development of mc give rise to the best stories sigh
How is this book not harem? harem = 1 fl and clearly there are more than one
Endless Evolution: Last Star
Fantasy · Arlemit